Correction devoir anglais 2

Publié le 27 avr. 2015 il y a 8A par Anonyme - Fin › 30 avr. 2015 dans 8A
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Sujet du devoir

      quelqu'un peut-il verifier mon texte et me relever de quelconque fautes?

 

      This video treats of women’s daily struggle. In Peru, 10 million women have already been harassed, and 70% of Lima population, make part of this statistic. Everlast, a sport cloths firm, trapped few guys loathing girls. The project is called “harassing your mother”.

            They invite recurrent sex offenders’ mother to help them. They had to wear a wig, to change their look, to rejuvenate with make up their face, and to cross the road in front of their son. Natalia, the presenter, is very amused of the situation. She wants to proof men that it is something bad to harass women.

            We see that all the time, men were caught in flagrante delicto. The first case called his mother “dirty panties”, and his mother started to tell off him, while he is confused and embarrassed “momy?”. It is very funny, we see the presenter who tell the mother to hit “his bastard” of son. It is the same for the second case, where the presenter tells the mother “to take your wig off and beat the jerk up”, after her son harassing words: “hello piggy”.

            The idea of using someone’s mother to choqued him is simply awsome. This satirical add is funny, short and effective. I am sur that those two guys will never loathed on a woman again, and for the people who saw it, it will stay in memory.

            Evolution is needed to go further. Nevertheless, it is usually very controversial (as was dissection for the church during renaissance epoch). It separates people, and make them challenging. In fact, competition permits searches to go faster. Progress is vital for our planet, and we have to change our vision of things to make strides. The fight of Natalia (the presenter) is praiseworthy, and it leads to progress. This document is an obvious reference to the notion of idea of progress, and to the notion of places and forms of power. The presenter uses media to convince people that harassing is a bad thing. That is soft power. Nevertheless, mother power is something essential too.

 

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      This video treats of women’s daily struggle. In Peru, 10 million women have already been harassed, and 70% of Lima population, make part of this statistic. Everlast, a sport cloths firm, trapped few guys loathing girls. The project is called “harassing your mother”.

            They invite recurrent sex offenders’ mother to help them. They had to wear a wig, to change their look, to rejuvenate with make up their face, and to cross the road in front of their son. Natalia, the presenter, is very amused of the situation. She wants to proof men that it is something bad to harass women.

            We see that all the time, men were caught in flagrante delicto. The first case called his mother “dirty panties”, and his mother started to tell off him, while he is confused and embarrassed “momy?”. It is very funny, we see the presenter who tell the mother to hit “his bastard” of son. It is the same for the second case, where the presenter tells the mother “to take your wig off and beat the jerk up”, after her son harassing words: “hello piggy”.

            The idea of using someone’s mother to choqued him is simply awsome. This satirical add is funny, short and effective. I am sur that those two guys will never loathed on a woman again, and for the people who saw it, it will stay in memory.


            Evolution is needed to go further. Nevertheless, it is usually very controversial (as was dissection for the church during renaissance epoch). It separates people, and make them challenging. In fact, competition permits searches to go faster. Progress is vital for our planet, and we have to change our vision of things to make strides. The fight of Natalia (the presenter) is praiseworthy, and it leads to progress. This document is an obvious reference to the notion of idea of progress, and to the notion of places and forms of power. The presenter uses media to convince people that harassing is a bad thing. That is soft power. Nevertheless, mother power is something essential too.




2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2015

     This video treats of women’s daily struggle. In Peru, 10 million women have already been harassed, and 70% of Lima population, make part of this statistic. Everlast, a sport cloths firm, trapped few guys loathing girls. The project is called “harassing your mother”.

Anonyme
Posté le 27 avr. 2015

They invite recurrent sex offenders’ mother to help them. They had to wear a wig, to change their look, to rejuvenate with making up their face, and to cross the road in front of their son. Natalia, the presenter, is very amused by the situation. She wants to prove men that it is something bad to harass women.


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