DM Anglais Commentaire.

Publié le 25 janv. 2015 il y a 9A par Anonyme - Fin › 27 janv. 2015 dans 9A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour à toutes et à tous,

Étant donné mon avis assez faible en anglais, je poste ce DM dans le but que quelqu'un me signal si mon devoir comportent d'éventuelles erreurs, et si cela serai possible, si on pourrait me dire ou se trouvent les fautes.

Merci de votre attention,

 

Le sujet est le suivant:


“Big cities need tall towers just as big companies need good logos.”

Mon DM commence ici:

My opinion is enough varied: I’m agree, and don’t agree with this sentence for some reasons.

On the one hand I’m agree with this statement for one main reason. We can talk about the example of the tower of Dubaï: Burj Khalifa. Certainly, this city is the capital of Arabia but a lot of people knew this city despite is icon: the tower which is the tallest construction all over the world. Indeed, a construction tower is a good way to make famous a city. Besides, make a big construction is the best way to show the power and the wealth of a country, actually, this is a form of power.


On the other hand, I’m don’t agree with this statement because a huge number of companies have a good logo and, I’m positive that much companies are not famous despite the originality of them logos.

            This sentence is wrong in part. We can’t relied the tall tower and the good logos for companies because a logo is not a form of power, with a logo we can’t show the wealth and the power of a country. Moreover, the logo doesn’t make the fame.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Mon DM commence ici:

My opinion is enough varied: I’m agree, and don’t agree with this sentence for some reasons.

On the one hand I’m agree with this statement for one main reason. We can talk about the example of the tower of Dubaï: Burj Khalifa. Certainly, this city is the capital of Arabia but a lot of people knew this city despite is icon: the tower which is the tallest construction all over the world. Indeed, a construction tower is a good way to make famous a city. Besides, make a big construction is the best way to show the power and the wealth of a country, actually, this is a form of power.

 

On the other hand, I’m don’t agree with this statement because a huge number of companies have a good logo and, I’m positive that much companies are not famous despite the originality of them logos.

            This sentence is wrong in part. We can’t relied the tall tower and the good logos for companies because a logo is not a form of power, with a logo we can’t show the wealth and the power of a country. Moreover, the logo doesn’t make the fame.

Merci d'avoir lu jusqu'ici,

Cordialement.




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 26 janv. 2015

slt

ce qui est en gras sont les mots que tu peut enlever!

My opinion is enoug   varied: I’m  agree,

On the one hand I’m agree with this statement for one main reason.

 

On the other hand, I’m don’t agree with this statement because a huge number of companies have a good logo and, I’m positive that much companies are not famous despite the originality of there logos.

en anglais tu si tu met I'm il faut conjuguer le verbe qui suis, sinon ça fait bizarre quand on le lit.

j'espère que ça t'aideras

 

 

 

 


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