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Bonjour, Je dois écrire une lettre de motivation pour lundi, et je pense avoir fais beaucoup de fautes, si vous pouviez me corriger ça serait super gentil et me dire si mes idées vont bien et si je dois rajouter des choses, merci par avance :)
Voici mon texte :
________________________________________________________Adresse
________________________________________________________April 12th
Adresse de l'employeur
Re : Laboratory assistant position
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am applying for the position of laboratory assistant, which was advertised in "Job Search" on Thursday 10 April.
My working experience improved my skills notably for my epxeriments in the laboratory. I have recently completed a biochemie degree at New York, USA.
In all my previous employment position, I have already leaden a team during one month. I am competent in the manipulations, that is to say I manipulate rapidly.
Sice the beginning of my working career, I have been congratulated to my work and my skills in the laboratory. I think that I would be a valuable asset to your organisation. I have enclosed my resume and can be contacted at any time for an interview on 0606060606.
__________________________________________________Your faithfully,
__________________________________________________My name
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Voici mon texte :
________________________________________________________Adresse
________________________________________________________April 12th
Adresse de l'employeur
Re : Laboratory assistant position
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am applying for the position of laboratory assistant, which was advertised in "Job Search" on Thursday 10 April.
My working experience improved my skills notably for my epxeriments in the laboratory. I have recently completed a biochemie degree at New York, USA.
In all my previous employment position, I have already leaden a team during one month. I am competent in the manipulations, that is to say I manipulate rapidly.
Sice the beginning of my working career, I have been congratulated to my work and my skills in the laboratory. I think that I would be a valuable asset to your organisation. I have enclosed my resume and can be contacted at any time for an interview on 0606060606.
__________________________________________________Your faithfully,
__________________________________________________My name
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De rien ;) J'espere que tu va reussir ! Bonne journée
"In all my previous employment position(S)"
Au pluriel, dans la mesure où tu en as occupé plusieurs, sinon c'est plutôt bien.
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experiment et non epxeriments ( mais surement une faute de frappe je pense ...)
met plutôt during a month et pas one month.
Since et non sice
Je ne mettrais pas mon numero de telephone en dernier mais plutôt mes coordonnées tout en haut a gauche avec nom prenom adresse et numero .
Et plutôt yours sincerely plutôt que faithfully !
Voila j'espere avoir pu t'aider :)
Bonjour Krykry57350,
Effectivement pour "since" et "experiments" se sont des fautes de frappe ^^
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide ;)