devoir anglais grammaire urgent

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Bonjour , merci de votre aide
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Dear Franck ,
I received yesterday your letter and i must explain you what did happen and why i didn't left with You .
I remember the day i have first met You . I immediately fell in love with You : i was so happy .... I could be me at last And forget my life terrible at home , where i was afraid of the violence of my father... Besides i had to take care of my brothers and sisters and it wasn't easy.
Then you said me that you wanted that we get married and go to Argentina . You hoped find a better job there .... And You asked me to follow you . I didn't know what to do :on the one hand, it was wonderful because it meant freedom and love. But on the onther hand , if i had left Dublin , i would abandon my brothers and sisters . No , i really couldn't do that . Moreover my roots is in Dublin : my life is very hard, but i know i can't to leave .
I even asked God to help me finding a solution , because i was torn between my love for You and my duty to my family...
When i was at the station with you, i was scared: there was so much people ... I could think only of my family. That's why i run away at the last minute.
I know that i'm always in love with you , but i think we must accept ours fate . I will never forget you.
Evelyne

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