Ecrire une lettre + une description d'une ville [besoin de correction]

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Anaelle13
Publié le 6 déc. 2011 il y a 2A Fin › 13 déc. 2011 2A
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SUJET DU DEVOIR

C 'est encore moi, avec encore un sujet d'anglais !

J'ai 2 sujets à réaliser :

1) Prepare about 15 lines to descripbe some cities that you like.
2) Find a photo you particulary like and imagine it's postcard.

J'aurais besoin d'une correction s'il vous plait !
J'ai du faire énormément de fautes...

Merci d'avance !

OÙ J'EN SUIS DANS MON DEVOIR

Mes 2 devoirs :

1) My city is Lisbon, the capital of Portugal. If one day you go to Lisbon, you can visited its numerous monuments, like the tower of Belém, the Cathedrale Santa Maria Major, the castles holy georges and sao jorges, etc, or its beautiful districts and street like la Baixa pombalina, Bairro Alto (on the center of Lisbon), the Chiado, whitch is betwin la Baixa pombalina and the bairro alto, or the oldest district of Lisbon : the Alfana (situated on east of the city center). It's very plesant to walk on this places, but in summer is sometimes much hot (in Portugal, the temperature rise aoften at more 104 farhenheit).
If you go to lisbon, it's impossible that you don"t pass next to the famous "azuelos" : the mozaïques charasteristic of Portugal. You can go too at the museums, like the national museum of Azulejo of Lisbon. To the end, if you go to Lisbon, you must go to one of the bigest shooping mall of Europe : The Colombo. He have 120 000 square meters. It's very impressioning and you can find all you need. He is next to the big stadium of Benfica : 'Estadio da Luz".

2) Hi Nour !
I hope that you are fine !
I writting this card from Algarve, in the south Portugal. It's really wonderful ! I always go to the beach and visited the many lanes in surroundings. The weather is very hot and sultry. I visited the sea resorts, fishrmen's vilage, la serra de monchique and more others things.
See you soon !
With Love from Anaëlle.



Voilà !
Bonne soirée !

5 commentaires pour le devoir Ecrire une lettre + une description d'une ville [besoin de correction]

miren75
miren75
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you can visit all its monuments.
streets
between et pas betwinn
situation on the east
pleasant et pas plesant
to walk in those places.
but in summer it is sometimes too hot (in Portugal, the temperature can be as high as 104 Fahrenheit).
If you go to Lisbon, don't miss the famous azuelos.
You can visit some museums like ........
Finally, if you decide to visit Lisbon, you must go to Colombo, the biggest mall in Europe. It is 120000 square meters large.
It's very impressing... it is located next to the big stadium called benfica "Estadio da luz"


2) Hi Nour !
I hope that you are fine !
I am writing this card from Algarve, in the south of Portugal. It's really wonderful ! I go to the beach and visit the lakes nearby. The weather is very hot and stuffy. I have visited a few sea resorts, and a fishermen's village, la serra de monchique and many others things.
See you soon !
Take care
Anaëlle

Anaelle13
Anaelle13
2A
Houla j'ai fait beaucoup de fautes...
Merci beaucoup miren75 pour cette correction !!

tina65
tina65
2A
impressionnant= impressive et pas impressing
...and many other things.(pas d's à other)

miren75
miren75
2A
impressing est correct

et tu peux enlever le s à other.



miren75
miren75
2A
pour Tina
source le dictionnaire webster (la référence en anglais)

"Impressing" is primarily a noun formed from the verb "to impress."
Example: "His favorite activity is impressing the women."
Notice that in this sentence, the verb is "is" and "impressing" is a noun formed from a verb.
It could also be used as an adjective, but this is rare.

Donc impressing est correct mais plus rarement utilisé que impressive.