Expression écrite au sujet de twitter

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour bonjour ! :) 

Notre professeur nous a donné un devoir sur le thème de :

Racontez une expérience extraordinaire qui vous est arrivée sur twitter, bien sûr inventée, alors voilà .

Firstly I had joined Twitter because one of my friends had told me a funny story about a cat who called «Grumpy». Then I decided to follow it and I wanted my cat to be famous too. So I created a page for my cat and we have started making some funny videos. But a lot of people blame me for copying Grumpy cat. I felt like stopping all my work about my cat and I felt like also deleting my twitter' page. To me I wasn't copying Grumpy but I made parodies with my cat and some people were very fan about that. Our fan could'nt help asking me to make again video, and I was very happy. So I started again doing videos but other people didn't like it and criticized again my work.
I was losing my will to go ahead. Until the day where the Grumpy's masters had reacted and told at Gumpy's fan I wasn't copying but I mad funny video who were different of him and they loved it. Finally since this episode Grumpy's masters follow me in Twitter and now I have been very famous.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'aimerais que vous me corrigiez s'il vous plaît, j'ai tous mes verbes au passé le plus important pour moi et les tournures de phrases ! :)

Merci ! :D