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Sujet du devoir
je dois faire un journal d'une fille qui habitera a Los Angeles.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
july 14, 1893: I've found a big room to rent with Patrick in Los Angeles. It's exactly what I had in mind.
july 24, 1893: I've found a job as a nanny for two rich ladies. I'll get $30 a week. I'm so happy.
august 2, 1893: I've got a boyfriend who is Patrick.
august 6; 1893: l've seen the Statue of Liberty ! It was so beautiful!
august 20;1893: I was invited to Patrick’s sister wedding party. I was danced a lot. she was so beautiful!
august 24; 1893 : I'm overjoyed , and I think I reach one's goal.
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Je trouve que ce n'est pas terrible il y a enormement de temps que tu utilise ( present perfect, present, preterit....) A quel temps doit il etre faire ? On est un peu perdu Et ton journal m'a l,'air trop peu !
A revoir ! Je t'aurais mis 9.5/20
il me semble que c'est au présent en fait vu que c'est un journal et que j'écris au moment du fait.
aidez moi pour les temps verbaux et ainsi aux expressions , je suis perdu en anglais
July, 14th, 1893
Today is a great day : we've been looking for a spacious room to rent in Los Angeles, and here it is, now we have it. Patrick and I are really happy. Moreover, this room seems to be exactly what we expected.
July, 23th
We are at home since a few days now, and everything is okay for us. But the room is not so big so that we can find moments of personal intimity. Sometimes I need to be alone for a while...I know that's normal and I don't worry about this. Patrick is actually kind and generous.
July, 24th
I have to write this : I am happy ! This morning I've seen two rich ladies, they were looking for a nanny. We have talked together. I was scared because I am quite young, so I tried to do my best in order to show them that I could be trusted. And they told me I could start the job next week. I'll get $30 a week !
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Quel est le TEMPS de ta narration? Ça me semble bizarre que tu en changes autant?
c'est du passé, c'est un journal