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Publié le 5 oct. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 22 oct. 2016 dans 7A
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My first name is Baptiste! My surname is Plome! I was born on the 14th of November in nineteen ninety-six. I was born in France, in Lyon. I'm fourteen years old. I'm right-handed. I am 1m70 tall. I live in Ville sur Jarnioux. We are five in my family. I have one brother and 1 sister. My brother's name is Maxime he is sixteen and He studies cooking, my sister’s name is Logane and she is nine years I’m not interested in politics. I like to watch film! My favourite film is Avatar by james Cameron and my favourite actor is Johny Depp. I love doing sport. My favourite sport is football. I started playing football when I was 7 in our local clubs. We train every Wednesday night from 7 to 9 and we play games against other teams every Sunday afternoon. There is a very good atmosphere. During the week, I get up at 7 hours. I have a shower, then I have breakfast, I get dressed and I take the bus to school. I start school at eight hours and i finish at 4 hours. I have a break for lunch. My favourite subjects are history and sport, but I hate physic. I'm not very good at it. After school, I sometimes do sport or go back home to do my homework. I usually have dinner at 8 hours. I go to bed at 10 hours. At the week end, I get up at 10 hours, I play at VIDEO GAME on ps3, alone or with my brother. I do my homework during 2 hours and sometime I watch a football match with my father. I support Monaco and my father supports Saint Etienne.




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Anonyme
Posté le 5 oct. 2011

Voici une correction de ta présentation en anglais :


 


My first name is Baptiste. My surname is Plome. I was born on the 14th of November in nineteen ninety-six. I was born in France, in Lyon. I'm fourteen years old. I'm right-handed. I am 1m70 tall. I live in Ville sur Jarnioux . We are a family of five. I have one brother and 1 sister. My brother's name is Maxime and he is sixteen. He is studying cooking, my sister’s name is logane and she is nine years old I’m not interested in politics. I like to watch movies. My favourite movie is Avatar by james Cameron and my favourite actor is Johny depp .I love doing sport. My favourite sport is football. I started playing football when I was 7 in our local clubs .We train every Wednesday night from 7 to 9 and we play games against other teams every Sunday afternoon. There is a very good atmosphere. During the week , I get up at 7 am. I have a shower, then I have breakfast, I get dressed and I take the bus to school. I start school at eight am and i finish at 4 pm. I have alunch break at noon. My favourite subjects are history and sport, but I hate physics. I'm not very good at it. After school, I sometimes do sport or go back home to do my homework. I usually have dinner at 8 pm. I go to bed at 10 pm. In the week end ,I get up at 10 am , I play VIDEO GAMEs on ps3 ,alone or with my brother .I do my homework during 2 hours and sometimes I watch a football game with my father .I support Monaco and my father supports Saint Etienne.

Anonyme
Posté le 5 oct. 2011
Tu pourras au lieu de dire "my first name is" dire "Iam Baptiste"
"I'm not interested by"
"I like watching movies"
"My favourite movie"
Anonyme
Posté le 6 oct. 2011
My first name is Baptiste. My surname is Plome. I was born in Lyon on the 14th of November . I'm fourteen years old. I'm right-handed. My high is 1m70 I live in Ville sur Jarnioux . We are five in my family. I have one brother and 1 sister. My brother's name is Maxime he is sixteen and He studies cooking , my sister’s name is logane and she is nine years old
I’m not interested in politics. I like watching films! My favourite one is Avatar by james Cameron and my favourite actor is Johny depp (tu peux dire pourquoi, ou dire « et particulière pour sa performance dans le film ... ») .I love doing sport. My favourite one is football. I started playing football when I was 7 in our local club .We train every Wednesday night from 7 to 9 pm and we play games against other teams on Sunday afternoons. There is a very good atmosphere.
During the week , I get up at 7 o'clock. I have a shower, then I have breakfast (tu peux ajouter ce que tu manges) , I get dressed and I take the bus to go to school. The forst class is at eight a.m. and i leave school at 4 p.m.. I have a break for lunch. My favourite subjects are history and sport, but I hate physics. I'm not very good at it. After school, I sometimes do sport or go back home to do my homeworks. I usually have dinner at 8 p.m. I go to bed at 10.
During the week end ,I get up at 10 a.m. , I play VIDEO GAMEs on ps3 ,alone or with my brother .I do my homeworks for 2 hours and I sometimes watch a football match with my father .I support the Monaco football team whereas my father supports the Saint Etienne team

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