Esque quelqu'un pourrais me le corriger s'il vous plait ? merci beaucoup d'avance

Publié le 1 mai 2016 il y a 7A par Anonyme - Fin › 3 mai 2016 dans 7A
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Do you prefer the film or the book ?

I think I prefer the film beacause I don't really understand the book when I read it, so I was more concentrate and concerned when I watch the film. but if i will understand the book I think I will apprecitate it more because on the book there are more details, and we can create the film in the mind with the imagination so it's more interesting that sitting on a couch and just watch. And in the film it lacked many details , and they change a lot of thing , such as the relationship between fiona and jonas , ans also the jobs , so when i knew it i was really dissapointed. So i'm torn between the film and the book because I more undertstood the book but I 'm really sad that they change , and lacked lot of details




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Anonyme
Posté le 1 mai 2016

Do you prefer the film or the book ?

I think I prefer the film because I don't really understood the book when I read it, so I was more concentrate and concerned when I watch the film. But if I understood the film I think I appreciate it more because in the book there are more details, and we can create the film in the mind with the imagination so it's more interesting that sitting on a couch and just watched. And in the film it lacked many details , and they change a lot of thing , such as the relationship between fiona and jonas , and also the jobs , so when i knew this, i was really dissapointed. So i'm torn between the film and the book because I more undertstood the book and I 'm really sad that they change , and it lacked lot of details

Anonyme
Posté le 3 mai 2016

Vous avez fait énormément d'erreurs en le corrigeant, n'aidez pas les autres si vous ne savez pas magner la langue anglaise correctement. 


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