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Salut, je dois faire une présentation de moi pour Lundi !! Je ne suis pas très bon en anglais donc voici ce que j'ai fais. J'attends que vous le corriger si possible :
Hello ! My name is ****** **********. I'm 15 years old, since thé 11 february 2016. I study un Jules Romains School, in ** ******* . I have one sister named ******** and one car named Mistigri. M'y sister is 17 years old and my cat is 9. My mother named ***** and my father named ******. M'y parents are séparated. I live in ******* with my mother and in ** ****** with my father. I have differents hobbies : Vidéo games,sport and trip. For Vidéo Games, I play always NBA2K. It's à game of basket-ball. I play vidéo games just the week-end and sometimes the week. My mother didn't want me to have war games. For sport, I practice tennis and basket-ball in *******. In the tennis, I have two friends, Louis and Baptiste but in the basket-ball, I don't have a friends. Finally, for trip, I love going to my house in ********. My dream is going to London. I finish , good bye.Voilà, c'est urgent ddonc j'espère que vous le ferez dans la journée. Merci d'avance et à+
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Voici ma correction:
Hello ! My name is ****** **********. I'm 15 years old and I'm studying at Jules Romains School, in ** ******* . I have one sister called ******** and one cat named Mistigri. My sister is 17 years old and my cat is 9. My mother's name is ***** and my father's name is ******. My parents got divorced. I live in ******* with my mother and in ** ****** with my father. I have differents hobbies : Vidéo games,sport and trip. For Video Games, I always play NBA2K. It's a very cool game about basket-ball. I play video games during the week-end and sometimes during the week. My mother didn't want me to play war games. For sport, I play tennis and basket-ball in *******. In my tennis group, I have two friends, Louis and Baptiste but in the basket-ball group, I don't have any friends. Finally, avout trip, I love going to my house in ********. My dream is to go to London. That's all about me! Thank you for listenning.
one cat named mistigri
my sister is 17..
my parents are separated
t'a mis des accents partout alors qu'il n'y a jamais d'accent en anglais
sinon c'est bien
Merci mais c'était le correcteur orthograpique
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les phrases sont bien je t'en rajoute pour que sa t'en face plein
i was born in 11 february
i live in
i am a music addict , she enjoys rock and electronic music
i'm fond of classical music
i spend a lot of time on it
i want to be a concert pianist
tu peux mettre mes phrases en plus sa te feras complets
Sinon tu m'as pas corriger , tu veux le faire ?