Description Chambre

Description Chambre

Publié le 7 mars 2010 il y a 4A par hippolyte49 - Fin › 9 mars 2010 dans 4A
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Sujet du devoir

Je doit décrire ma maison et ma chambre en anglais.
J'ai fini de décrire ma maison, il me manque plus ma chambre que je ne n'arrive pas à décrire...

Voilà ce que j'aimerai traduire :

Ma chambre est moyennement grande, mais est très lumineuse.
Mon lit est au fond à côté de mon armoire.
Mon bureau est petit est mal rangé car il y a trop de devoirs et de cahier dessus.
Je n'aime pas ma chambre car les couleurs ne sont pas belle.
Je peux entendre les oiseaux depuis ma chambre : c'est vraiment agréable !!

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

/!\ Corriger moi SVP /!\

My bed is (au fond) next to my cupbord.
My (bureau) is little and (mal rangé) because there are to many homeworks above.
I don't like my bedroom because the colors are ugly.
I can hear the birds : it's very cosy !!


9 commentaires pour ce devoir


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Mottejotte
Mottejotte
Posté le 7 mars 2010
Salut! Je t'ai tout retraduit, même si presque tout me semblait juste:

My bed is in the back of my bedroom next to my cupboard.
My desk is small and very badly tidied because there are too many bits of homework on top of it.
I don't like my bedroom because the colours are really ugly.
In the morning, I can hear the birds! It's really cosy!

Bravo! En général tout est bon!

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catinette
catinette
Posté le 7 mars 2010
Alors pour la phrase ou tu ne sais pas dire au fond je dirais:
My bed is at the bottom next to my cupboard.

Puis pour dire bureau et mal rangé je dirais:
My desk is little and badly tidied up because there is too many exercise books and homework above.

Que veut tu de plus?
catinette
catinette
Posté le 7 mars 2010
Pour l'aide d'avant j'ai oublié de mettre la certitude de réponse: 19/20
Cerise
Cerise
Posté le 7 mars 2010
Salut, c'est ce que tu as mis ! Bravo
Je te propose ceci : Mot pour mot ce que tu as demandé !

My room is fairly large, but is very bright. My bed is on the opposite side of my wardrobe. My office is small is misplaced because there is too much homework and notebook above. I do not like my room because the colors are not beautiful. I can hear the birds since my room is really nice!

Voilà, bon courage !
fritchouky70
fritchouky70
Posté le 7 mars 2010
Je sais que mal rangé c'est not tidy mais après , j'ai déjà fait cette exercice mais je n'ai pas mis c'est expression !!!!
sanou936
sanou936
Posté le 7 mars 2010
Voila la traduction de ton texte en anglais :
My room is averagely big, but it is very bright.
My bed is at the bottom in quoted by my cupboard.
My office(desk) is badly tidied up because there are too much homework and exercise books above.
I do not like my room because colors are not beautiful.
I can hear birds since my room: it is really pleasant!!
J'espere que cela t'aidera !
Bon courage !
starsandstripes85
starsandstripes85
Posté le 7 mars 2010

Bonsoir,

My room is fairly big, but very bright (je rejoins Cerise).
My bed is in the back of my room, next to my cupboard.(d'accord avec Mottejotte)
My desk is small and very messy (c'est mieux, messy = pas rangé), because it is covered with piles of homework and copybooks.
I don't like my room, because the colours are rather ugly.
In the morning I can hear the birds , which is really pleasant.
john75
john75
Posté le 8 mars 2010
My room is fairly large, but is very bright.
My bed is on the opposite side of my wardrobe.
My office is small is misplaced because there is too much homework and notebook above.
I do not like my room because the colors are not beautiful.
I can hear the birds since my room is really nice!



voici la corection

My bed is on the opposite side of my cupbord.
My office is small and poorly gap because there are many Homeworks above.
I do not like my room because the colors are ugly.
I can hear the birds: it's very nice!
john75
john75
Posté le 8 mars 2010
My room is fairly large, but is very bright.
My bed is on the opposite side of my wardrobe.
My office is small is misplaced because there is too much homework and notebook above.
I do not like my room because the colors are not beautiful.
I can hear the birds since my room is really nice!

voici la corection


My bed is on the opposite side of my cupbord.
My office is small and poorly gap because there are many Homeworks above.
I do not like my room because the colors are ugly.
I can hear the birds: it's very nice!

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