Expression écrite

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Publié le 24 mars 2013 il y a 1A Fin › 31 mars 2013 1A
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SUJET DU DEVOIR

bonjour tout le monde....comment allez vous?
j'ai une expression ecrite en anglais qui est:
where would you like to live later?Describe your favourite house.
je l'ai fait est ce que quelqu'un pourrez me corriger.
Merci d'avance.

OÙ J'EN SUIS DANS MON DEVOIR

later I would like to live in the Flatemate because I want meet new poeple and make new friends ,Share expenses and decrease my living costs,and Creak a second family when living far from home,lets i live with people,with similar interests and lifestyle college,university with other students I would like that this flatemate in Australia or united kingdom or united states;I want that my roommates are more girls because we understand bette,and we share the same things and more often the same opinion.

2 commentaires pour le devoir Expression écrite

MinSoo
MinSoo
1A
Later, I would like to live in the (Flatemate?) because I want to meet new people and make new friend, share (Expenses ? Tu parles d'argent ?) and decrease my living costs and also create a second family when living far from home.
Live with people that has similar interests and lifstyle from college, university and other students. I would like this flatemate in Australia or in the United Kingdom or even United stats.
I want that my roommate are mostly girls because we can understand each other better and share the same things, and more often the same opinion.

MisterBean
MisterBean
1A
Later, I wish I lived in a flatmate in Australia for the following reasons:
I want to make new friends with whom I want to share expenses in order to diminish my living costs. Having a second family would be something important to allow to adapt myself to a new way of living far from my own family.
I wish I lived with people who have common interests, similar lifestyle at junior high school or at university with other students. The flatmate could be located either in Australia,in the States or in the United Kingdom. I wish my roommates were girls. Hence, we could understand each other better and we could share the same things and very often the same opinions!


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