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I ran to the city club and arrived at 9am.
I met John. John is the director of the club.
I went to the Fitness center. I worked in the Fitness center.
At 12 pm. I talked with Peter. Peter is the other coordinator.
We had a cup of coffee, a salad and a piece of cake at the club cafeteria. That was nice!
At 1 pm. I met the junior football team or the football field. We trained in the field for two hours.
I had a shower and went home.
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Bonne suite!
I ran to the city club and arrived at 9am, what a surprise John is also there, it's a director of this club. I went in this fitness center where I worket.
Around 12Pm I talked with Peter who is an other coordinator center's. In the club cafeteria we had a cup of cofee, a salad and same a piece of cake. That wwas nice ! It's delicious. Then, at 1pm. I met the junior football durinf two hours we trained, after I had a shower it's necessary ! and of course I went at home
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I ran to the city club and arrived at 9am.
Là I met John, il is the director of the club.
Ensuite I went to the Fitness center, car I worked in the Fitness center jusqu'à
At 12 pm.
Je t'ai mis en français.
merci !