devoir anglais

devoir anglais

Publié le 25 févr. 2011 il y a 3A par yasnoub - Fin › 4 mars 2011 dans 3A
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Sujet du devoir

Je dois envoyer un email a ma classe d’Angleterre pour raconter mon séjour (au sein d'une famille canadienne) au canada,mais avant je dois faire la préparation pouvez vous me corriger s'il vous plait? 1)imagine a english name for yourself,2)imagine the name of the canadian family,3)the day you arrived in Canada,4)the city you arrived in,5)the weather,6)your first impressions of Canada,7)during the trip you went to an ice hockey game.Imagine in wich city you saw the game,8)write the names of the two teams that were playing,9)write the resultof the game,10)write an adjective that describe the game,11)imagine how you travelled the stadium,12)did you go to the game alone?,13)write down three pieces of informaton about the first nations that you will include in your e-mail,14)imagine yhe subject of each photograph,15)writ any other informatin you want to include in your e-mail.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

1)John walken.2)Lenon family.3)10th fabruary.4)montreal.5)snowy cloudy.6)canada is a big country with many people.7)caligary.8)maple leafs of Toronto and Oilers of Edmonton.9)Maple Leafs 5-1 Oilers .10)the game was exciting i loved it.11)by taxi.12)yes i went to the game alone.13)in canada there wasthree groups of aboriginal people in canada :first nations ,inuits and metis -the wendet people between lake hunon and lake ontario in big long wooden houses-they grew crops such as vorn and beans to get food they collected berries and hunted wild animals such as bear and wolves,14)my arrival in canada-my visit of canada during my study trips there concerning my study trip and some others photos and inomations.15)canada is a marvelous country,with good snowy weather in winter when the season is winter there is many competitions of ice hockey,i just love that sport...and in canaada there is a delicious drink called¨¨MAPLE SIRUP¨¨!hmmmmm i can't stop thinking about, it's delicious taste!and canada's story is facinating!


6 commentaires pour ce devoir


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loulou24
loulou24
Posté le 25 févr. 2011
je ne vois pas de fautes mais n'oublie je se dit I(i majuscule)
babylol
babylol
Posté le 25 févr. 2011
IL NY A PAS DE FAUTES :) MAIS OUBLIE PAS LES MAJUSCULES AUX NOMS PROPRE ! ( Canada .. ) :)
manfred
manfred
Posté le 2 mars 2011
pour le theme des colons(first nations) tu peux ajouter:

the first nations discovered maple syrup.
each of them has got his own traditions.
first nations are the native people of canada, called indians.
yasnoub
yasnoub
Posté le 3 mars 2011
merci de ton aide!
yasnoub
yasnoub
Posté le 3 mars 2011
oui c'est vrai j'ai oublie les maj merci!
yasnoub
yasnoub
Posté le 3 mars 2011
merci pour ta proposition!

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