exercice d anglais merci

This is my best friend! His name is Dylan and he is 12 years old. Dylan is fond of video games, football and chocolate. He is happy when he has good grades in school and when he is near his parents and his friends.

Pour faire une rédaction en anglais, trouve d'abord ce que tu vas écrire en français. N'essaie pas de faire compliquer. Sers toi de ce que tu as appris. Généralement, les devoirs vont de pairs avec les cours.

Ensuite, tu passes à la phase traduction, tu regardes si tu arrives à traduire tout que tu as écris en français. Si tu n'y arrives pas, cherche des synonymes, essaie d'écrire la phrase différemment.

Au final, tu arriveras à raconter ce que tu veux.

Bonne chance.

my best friend 's name is Dylan he was 12, he loves football and video games chocolate, to be happy, have friends near his parents to him and have a good result at the school

My best friend is Dylan, he's twelve years old. He likes playing video games, and play football. 

For being happy he needs chocolate, be with his friends, have his parents who love him and have good marks at school. All of those things makes my best friend fine. I hope that happen all his life because I love him, and I would like to take care of him. xoxox

My bestfriend is Dylan , he is twelve years old , he like play videogames , play football and eat chocolate. He love this friends , this family and have good result in english test as school.

Voilà , c'est pas exactement ce que tu voulais mais j'ai essayer de faire mieu , sa veux dire : "Mon meilleure ami est dylan , il a 12ans et il aime les jouer aux jeux vidéos , jouer au foot et manger du chocolat. Il aime ses amis , sa famille et avoir de bon résultat au contrôle d'anglais" voilà ;)

Bonjour, je peux te proposer cela, Cependant, je ne comprends pas une de tes phrases.

"pour etre heureux , d avoir ses amis ses parents "

Dylan is my best friend, he is 12 years old. He likes video games, football and chocolate.

He is happy when he has her family and her friends near to him, and when he has good marks.

My best friend is calles Dylan, he is 12 years old. He enjoys playing videogames, playing football or eating chocolate. 

GOOD MORNING WHAT IS YOUR NAME

My best friend is Dylan, he is 12. He likes videos games, playing football, chocolate and in order to be happy, he needs his parents and his friends just next to him and also he needs to have good marks at school.