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Pouvez vous me courriger mon texte en anglais. Le diamant exerce, depuis sa découverte, un pouvoir de fascination et représente un symbole de richesse et de féminité. Cette pierre est réellement fascinante : sa brillance est attirante, sa pureté est éternelle, son éclat éblouit, sa lumière ravit, sa beauté met en valeur, mieux, elle rend belle, elle sublime. Le diamant est éternel et a toujours fasciné l'homme et ce depuis l'époque des pharaons, pour qui, il symbolisait la vie. Les diamants étaient réservés aux personnes fortunées. Puis à l'époque de l'empire romain, le diamant est devenu synonyme de force et d'opulence. Depuis, dans la joaillerie, on continue à attribuer au diamant la richesse et la force.Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Diamond exercises since its discovery, a fascination and represents a symbol of wealth and femininity. This stone is really fascinating : its brightness is attractive, its purity is eternal, its brilliance dazzles, its light delights, beauty highlights better, it makes beautiful, it sublime. The diamond is eternal and has always fascinated man ever since the time of the pharaohs, for which it symbolized life. Diamonds were reserved for wealthy individuals. Then at the time of the Roman Empire , the diamond has become synonymous with strength and opulence. Since, in jewelery , we continue to allocate diamond wealth and strength.3 commentaires pour ce devoir
J'aurais plutôt dit "its beauty highlights"
Par contre, quand tu parles des pharaons, il fait dire "who". On utilise "which" lorsqu'on parle d'un objet, "who" quand on parle d'un humain.
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Since they have been discovered, diamonds have always exercised some kind of fascination, they also represent a high symbol of wealth, and they are asociated to the idea of feminity.
Indeed this stone is really fascinating : no one can't but admire such an attractive brightness, and its purity seems to be eternal. Its brillance dazzles, its light delights, and it makes beautiful and sublimes whoever can wear them.
Diamond can be considered as eternal and has always fascinated men ever since times of egypcian pharaons who used to confere it a symbolic dimension of life. These precious stones were reserved for wealthy people. Then, during the Roman Empire, diadmond became synonymous of strength and opulence. Nowadays, in jewelry we still allocate diamond wealth and strength, and it's also true for peoples's colective representations.
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it sublime avec un s je pense "it sublimes" car c'est la 3ème personne comme "he" et "she"