Publié le 12 déc. 2010 il y a 3A Fin › 14 déc. 2010 3A
SUJET DU DEVOIR
Bonjour, Pourriez vous me dire s'il y a beaucoup de fautes dans le texte ci dessous ? Merci d'avance !!
OÙ J'EN SUIS DANS MON DEVOIR
I am a young writer under 18. I am very passionate about writing and newspapers have already published some short novels of mine. Recently a presentation of my work was published in the Times thanks to a challenge which I have won (car toujours une conséquence dans le présent?). The aim was to finish a novel in the same spirit of the beginning.
I share my time between New York where live with my family and Paris where I take lesson in the “Conservatoire national supérieur d'art dramatique”. Indeed, moreover this writer work, I have played theatre since I am five years old and I made two apparitions in movies which a French movie with a famous French actor named Guillaume Canet. I join an extract of the movie and a piece from one of my work; a short story named Happiest Nightmare.
The main character of Happiest Nightmare is an anonymous girl. The reader unknowns her name, her age and the reason that she is being here. Between dream and reality, she explores a landscape which seems disconnected from our world. Dazzled by the magnificence of the place, all looks perfect to her. But it is too beautiful to be real how becomes aware the reader thanks to disturbing elements. The reader only understands in the last sentence why all was so strange to him.
I know your collection “1sth short novel” and I think my story is exactly in your editorial policy. By using the five senses of the character, the writer, I propose to bury the reader into the heart of an “unknown and disoriented environment”, your collection’s devise.