Correction anglais

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AngusPoccus
Publié le 19 nov. 2010 il y a 3A Fin › 22 nov. 2010 3A
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SUJET DU DEVOIR


"Give me your tired, yout poor,
Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.
Send these, the homeless, tempest-tost to me,
I lift my lamp beside the golden door!"

Répondre aux questions suivantes:
.What can you guess about america's tradition ?
.What did the statue of liberty symbolise of immigrants.
.Where is the poem ?
.What the link between the poem and the america's tradition ?
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J'ai repondu à toutes les question sauf 1 car en français je ne sais même pas quoi mettre (donc si vous avez des idées...) et pour les autres j'aimerais savoir si vous pouvez me corriger.

Merci !

OÙ J'EN SUIS DANS MON DEVOIR

.What can you guess about america's tradition ?
America is considerated like a free contry where people can earns money. This country is a hope for eveybody same the poorest.

.What did the statue of liberty symbolise of immigrants.
For immigrant it's the symbole of liberty et hapiness because it's the symbole of America. Furthermore it's the first thing they see when he arrived in USA: they know they are arrived an their difficulty travel are finished. Now they will be happy, and they haven't got problem. (qu'ils n'auront plus de problème)

.Where is the poem ?
This poem is engraved on the pedestal of the statue of liberty.

.What the link between the poem and the america's tradition ?
Celle là je vois même pas ce que je peux dire... Je trouve qu'elle ressemble trop à la question 1.

Descirbe the picture.

On the forground we can se a couple of immigrant with their children. They are back(Ils sont de dos)and looking at the landscape. Far away in the background we see the Statue of Liberty. One can assume that they located on Ellis Island and they await the end of the quarantine order to set foot in the U.S., their hope.

2 commentaires pour le devoir Correction anglais

Defne69
Defne69
3A
C'EST BiEN (:

chickenmanben95
chickenmanben95
3A
Bonjour AngusPoccus,

Voici les corrections de l'orthographe de tes réponses:

"America is considerated like a free country where people can earn money. This country is a hope for everybody even for the poorest.

For immigrant it's the symbol of liberty et happiness because it's the symbol of America. Furthermore it's the first thing they see when they arrive in USA: they know that they arrived an all their travel difficulty is finished. Now they will be happy, and they won't have any more problems.

This poem is engraved on the pedestal of the Statue of Liberty.

On the foreground we can see a couple of immigrants with their children. They have behind their backs a beautiful landscape. Far away in the background we see the Statue of Liberty. One can assume that they're located on Ellis Island and they await the end of the quarantine order to set foot in the U.S., they hope..."

Cordialement,

Benjamin CNED 3ème