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Sujet du devoir

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Donc voila aujourd'hui je post mon devoir d'anglais sur la notion idée de progrès, donc voila je voulais savoir si c'était convenable ^^ 

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Digital Detox

Introduction:

My presentation deals with the theme “ Idea of progress” and more specifically on digital detox. Firts of all, id'like to give a definition of this notion and a definition to digital detox.
The idea of progress can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change a technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world a better place.
Nowadays digital detox is a current topic to say to be unplug to technology.

Problématique

We'll try to see if the technological advance is relly go to our.

Plan :

We try to aswer to this notion into two parts, in first parts the current technollogy and in the second part the digital detox.

I) Partie:

Nowadays the technology is omnipresent in our lifes, we can't flee this if we live in a bif city or a small city. However everypeople seems to be accustomed. It's rare to see one person without phone computer or other technological equipment. This aspect of our life it's present in the hobies, in the work or in the medicine.
Nowadays a generation is very famous we call them “ Geek” young or older people are geek. A geek it's a person who passes their all timle in a computer in a game online or in a playstation. These people know certains things about the coding of computer the hacking of game and morer other. On a simply way everypeople past their own time tout play to their phone their tablet their computer or past their time in front of television. Nowadays many people use Facebook or skype to see other people who are far to us. It's more simple to communicate with a person who a far in your sofa. The social network of course is the moste popular way to past our time, to tchat with other person to have fun, to play ect Many youg people say they are addict. We can see in the document Why Social Media Is So Addictive that 40 million photos are uploaded to Instagram per day in Instagram or that Google+ boasts more than 343 million users as of July 2013. The social network are the most popular way to past our time because:
-you do not need particcular technical skill to create a personal page,
-it' usually free,
- it's very easy to keep in contact xtih people of similar interests or to contact new friends.

In the workplace the technologi is really important every busness man use aa phone or computer to keep the rhythm and to be more productive. Internet it's a bette way to have information about everything and to keep connect with the international information. This is permit to speak with a stranger about the busness without to do a travel around the world.
This is in the medecine world that the technology is the most imporstant in fact to operathe a person we need to technological instrument. The milieu who the technologicaly it's the most important it's the scientifique searching. There are everyday adavanded againts the diseasses. The diseases like tetanus, influenza H1N1and more other was treated.

Even though nawadays the technpological allowus to past the time, working with more efficiency and permit to save lifes, we can wonder if it's an obligation to be connect everytime.

II) Partie:

However nowaday there are people want to be desconnected.There are camps which propose a Digital deetox or experience which propose an experience during on week or more time.
In the USA a teacher propose to his students to pass on week without technology it's a techless week. This experience was done on a voluntary basis, only two student refused. Projects objective was to unplug all technological devicies The student shared at the end of this experience their opinion. Certain student said that this is a good experience, some people wanted to change after this expoerience. They said it like to be liberating and even that they open their eyes. However certain student said that they were anxious that they can't wait the end of this experience. Many were addict and this experience changing their routine. In comprehension oral we heard that people can pass their holiday in a camp whittout all technological devices. All participant must to unplung to their gadjets. In this camp all food and activities are inclued. This experience permit to them to reconnect with him self, with other people. In this camp we can swim there are a camp fire all permite to have fun although disconnecting. This camp permit in simply way to disconnect from technological gadjets and reconnect with your-self and people, instead of keep face to face with a computer.
Nowaday there a certain people who exil him-self. We saw in the document “ Man outside his yurt” a man who is outside his yurt. We can think that maybe he made this yurt and he seems to live on this yurt.Maybe he might be fed up with the city life, he must be wanting to leave away from pollution. We can suppose that he must be in favour of simple life, techless life, a back to basics lifestyle. Clearly he approves of an eco-friendly, environement friendly lifestyle.
On the contrary certain people haven't make the choice to be unplung. We can see this in the document “ Black out: When the light go off” There are a several electricity failiures all around the world, the peoples share their experience in a blog post. We can see that Elizabeth I New-York say that during the black out she gone outside, talk with her neighbourg, and she said that during evening she coul saw all starts in the sky. Jordan an other people who posted said “ With nothing yo do like many other we can helping direct traffic”, there were many generosity acts like a restaurents were offering free drinks to the thousand of people who were walking home.The people were in first time afraid because they are dependent of the electricity but in a second time we go outside like a freedom.

Conclusion:

Nowadays we can escape to thechnologies in our work, studie. We need to have certain gadjets like in medecine, our generation is all time connect However some time it's good to change our habits and unplug our gadjets and be disconnect. We can't escape but when we can do we should be disconnect.