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Bonjour,
J’ai une rédaction en anglais à faire. Pourriez-vous me corriger ? J’ai un doute sur la traduction concernant certaines parties de mon texte.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Moreover, faced with these impressive and surprising progress, human is only spectator, but entirely actor of this technology.
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Scientists have make a breakthrough.
They will soon succeed in curing a patient severely affected by the depression, through neuroscience. Such scientific feats show how technology can succeed in advancing the medical field and cure diseases.
Science is thus able to perform great technological prowess. But these advances have very positive impacts into the medical field, they can also have negative effects in the long term. What are they?
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We saw the new technological revolutions through science. It continues to move forward in technology. But we also saw how the impacts of these technologies, if they are poorly mastered, can be negative.
Merci beaucoup pour la correction.
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Je trouve vraiment bien ton texte. Juste un ou deux trucs :
1. La partie <<human is only spectator,but entirely actor of this technology>>. De pointe de vue de qqn qui parle anglais , je trouve un peu étrange cette phrase.
Ce que t'as voulu dire c'est que les humains sont les spectateurs mais aussi les acteurs/createurs en technologie ?
Si oui, je pense que tu devra changer :"humans" en pluriel," is" en are ,spectator en pluriel, et avant "entirely" tu mets "are also" et apres "entirely" tu mets" the actors/creators of ..etc".
2. <<But these advances have very positive impacts into the medical field, they can also have negative effects in the long term.>>
La phrase est bien sauf je pense c'est mieux de mettre "but they can also have..etc"
Merci beaucoup Anglwngs pour ton aide, j'ai bien tenu compte de tes conseils
Moreover, faced with these impressive and surprising progresses (pluriel), the human being (serait plus correct) is only spectator, but entirely actor of this technology.
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Scientists have made a breakthrough.
They will soon succeed in curing a patient severely affected by depression, through neuroscience. Such scientific feats show how technology can succeed in advancing the medical field and cure diseases.
Science is thus able to perform great technological prowess. But these advances have very positive impacts into the medical field, they can also have negative effects in the long term. What are they?
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We saw the new technological revolutions through science. It continues to move forward in technology. But we have also seen the impacts of these technologies: if they are poorly mastered, can be negative.
Merci miaouxx de ta correction
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