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Family Portraitis a song written and sung by Pink takes from her Album Miss Understood in 2001, which describes the pain of a girl who lives in a broken family.

-We can see in the video clip that there is a little girl and Pink who appears as a woman, they wear the same clothes, and we can think that it was Pink when she was a child so we can see that she suffers since her childhood because of the separation of his parents.

-When we listen to this music we can see that in the 1st line Pink says "Mama please stop cryin, I can not stand the sound", it shows the suffering of his mother so she want to go back to the way they were.

I also think that when she says “I don’t want love to destroy me like it did my family” 
she means that she doesn’t want her family to separate, and break apart, because of her parents fighting.

Then she says "you fight money, bout me and my brother", so there is a fight between her mother and her father and When Pink says, ‘It aint easy growin up in World War III”, I think she means that it’s hard to grow up when everyone is fighting around you.

The phrase “Remember that the night you left, you took my shining star,” I think it means that when her family separated it broke her heart.

After she insiste there is a repetition of this phrase in the music "Can we work it out? Can we be a family?" it's a metaphor since she wishes she had a peaceful life with her family,

She thinks it's her fault and promises to be better in hope that her dad won't leave"I promise i'll be better ,Daddy please don't leave''

Finally she says '' In our family portrait, we look pretty happy '', she dreams about that and in the clip she looks at the portrait in the TV and understands that it will not be like before, she is very nostalgic and the house dark shows us that it is tense at home.

In my opinion this song gives a message that it is important to work together, and not fight at home because your home should be the place where you should always be safe and it shows that life is better when you have a family to love.