Expression écrite anglais

Sujet du devoir

bonjour j’ai une expression écrite à écrire sur le sujet : décrire son expérience au Népal après une année sabbatique avec ses parents. J’aimerais savoir si c’est possible de corriger mon devoir s’il vous plaît.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Hello Dad and Mom !

I go home in one week. I took a little time write to you. My experience in Nepal will remain unforgettable.

I passed two weeks in an orphanage to do in community volunteering in one of the internships of teaching that proposed the humanitarian organization. We were to keep of children, their teach english and we were to organize activities for them.

I also participated in the installation of a solar panel at a community center of Choudandi where only 15% of the population has access to electricity.

I visited the country. I saw the Lumbini Temple, the Sagarmatha national park and of course Mount Everest. You know the momos ? It’s one of the traditional dishes in Nepal there is even  a competition annual which consist has eaten most momos in minute !

I stayed three weeks in another orphanage in Katmandou. I did different activities with children as making a beauty workshop where we cleaned the nails of hands and feet, brushed their teeth and washed their hands.

The family that lodge  me was very welcoming ! I have a room and a bathroom for me. It allowed me to learn more about life in Nepal.

I still have one week before to go home so I will visit other places in the country.

Kisses !