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Bonjour à tous,Voila j'ai un oral d'anglais, un petit, à faire en une soirée, nous sommes trois dessus le sujet est:
Deux personnes se renseigne auprès d'un conseiller pour choisir une destination en afrique.
Les deux personnes ici sont représentez par le 1/ et le conseiller par le 2/.
Mon texte me convient, tout du moins ce qu'il contient.
Cela dit je crois, je suis sur que beaucoup de mes phrases sont mal écrite.
Merci à ceux qui prendrais donc la peine de corriger ce texte et de m'aider à mieux formuler celui ci.
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
1/Good Morning.2/Hi, What can I do for you?
1/We are here because we are searching for a travel.
1/In africa, We never visit this country.
2/good decision, Africa is truly a beautiful country.
1/Yes, we supose
1/We love beautiful landscapes.
2/You're searching for some beautiful country?
1/Yes but we especially searching for impressive things.
1/And we love thrills.
2/Ok, I suggest you Victoria Falls, it's truly impressive and we can do bungee jumping.
1/I like that, I never make Bungee jumping.
1/Me too, thanks you for all.
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J'aurais plutot mis..
1/We are looking for a trip in Africa, we have never visited
this country.
2/ you're looking for a beautiful country ? (pk some ?)
1/Yes but we (especially) want impressive things (ca évite de dire trois fois looking for..)
1/We are looking for a trip in Africa, we have never visited
this country.
2/ you're looking for a beautiful country ? (pk some ?)
1/Yes but we (especially) want impressive things (ca évite de dire trois fois looking for..)
1/Good morning, sir/madam (dépend du conseiller)
2/Hi, how may I help you?
1/We decided to travel for our holydays.
1/We would like to go in Africa because we never went there.
2/Good choice. Africa is a truly beautiful continent.
1/That what we heard.
1/We love wild landscapes (paysages sauvages)
2/Do you have any particular wishes for the country?
1/Anything with impressive sight.
1/We are thrill seeker (amateur de sensations fortes).
2/Well, I suggest Victoria's Falls in (pays). It's really awe-inspiring (synonyme de impressive). There you may do bungee jumping. It's quite fun.
1/I never did bungee jumping.
1/Neither did I. Thanks for everything.
Voilà
2/Hi, how may I help you?
1/We decided to travel for our holydays.
1/We would like to go in Africa because we never went there.
2/Good choice. Africa is a truly beautiful continent.
1/That what we heard.
1/We love wild landscapes (paysages sauvages)
2/Do you have any particular wishes for the country?
1/Anything with impressive sight.
1/We are thrill seeker (amateur de sensations fortes).
2/Well, I suggest Victoria's Falls in (pays). It's really awe-inspiring (synonyme de impressive). There you may do bungee jumping. It's quite fun.
1/I never did bungee jumping.
1/Neither did I. Thanks for everything.
Voilà
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dans l'ensemble c'est satisfaisant dans le sens et en effet, c'est mal dit.
je reformule