comme un probleme en Anglais...

Sujet du devoir

je n' ais pas jamais écris un blog alors j ai un problème sur la façon de présenté le texte et bien sur de je n'ai pas d' idée pour ce qui est indispensable d écrire

you work for the international tourist agency secret destinations. you receive a commission for the number of client you bring to the company and your superiors encourage you to be as inventive as possible. invent an entry for a travel blog site to encourage tourists to use secret destination to book their holyday. you will imagine you are a tourits who has travelled with secret destination. choose a destination in a English -speaking country. find a picture to illustrate your entry and write the blog. make sure you name the place, describe the setting, the weather, and one or two anecdotes or experience. remembre the objective is to encourage people to travel with secret destination, so you need to mention the company s name and show how fantasic a Holiday with secret destination is! describe your feelings make people feel your destination is particularly special and that only secret destinations offers destinatins like it.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

j ai commencé mais je ne sais pas se que ça donne

jetez un coup d œil et si possible corriger svp:

Australien experience

Hello guys I am here to tell you about my secret destination Sydney and beautiful place in Australia where you can spend pleasant time with your friends and family and, you can visit amazing places such as the harbour bridge, Opera House, Sydney tower and queen Victoria building and the huge local supermarket where you can buy stuff in cheap prices and enjoy it weather along by the beach side and enjoy the breeze of the ocean as Sydney is considered to be the cleanest city and having a trip with secret destination have been a pleasant stay and a wonderful trip to be visited once more. You can even do water sports activity and do car trip to Melbourne for better shopping.
I thank Secret Destination how made me discover this wonderful city.

The marina really is liven up and very appreciated

The marriage of the former buildings and the new infrastructures is not shocking and pleasant to look.

normalement il y a des photos je ne sais pas si ça va marcher

merci d avance