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Bonjour,
J'ai dû ecriré 2 strophes pour dénoncer un aspect social actuel. Pouvez-vous corriger mes erreurs ? Merci beaucoup !
The Human activities have impacts
on our live, our environnement.
When your children are going to become adults,
They will have health problems
Due to the global warming
Tornadoes, floods, will always have,
Because we don't do anything !
The factory pollute
The agriculture pollute
And this will have continu
If we will give a planet
In a good "health"
We will have to changing
Our consommation
Because there are global warming
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Merci beaucoup aux personnes qui m'aideront !
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Tornadoes, floods, will always have,
Tornadoes, floods, we (?) always have,
hurricane or storm are allready a menace and if we aren't going to do something
reformule la ligne 6 mon anglais est très limité car je ne le pratique plus depuis des années
ligne 10: and all of these will continue
Ligne 12: Factories pollute
We will have to change...because there is global warming
tornadoes and flood will always exist (peut etre)
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide !
the agriculture pollutes
The Human activities have impacts on our life, our environment.
When your children are going to become adults,
They will have health problems
Due to the global warming
Tornadoes, floods, will always have,
Because we don't do anything!
The factories pollute
The agriculture pollute
And this will have continued
If we will give a planet
In a good "health"
We will have to change
Our consultation
Because there is global warming
voila il est corrigé
Ligne 13 : We have to change
dernier : Because there is global warming
jai trouver que sa desoler
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
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Ligne 3 : When your children will become adults
Ligne 10 : And all of ths will continu
Ligne 11-12 : If we give to the planet // A good health
Ligne 13 : We have to change
La ligne 6 je ne comprend pas.