Correction résumé anglais

Publié le 13 févr. 2018 il y a 6 mois par Margaux.A 46 - Fin › 15 févr. 2018 dans 6 mois
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Bonjour, Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait rapidement vérifier si mon résumé comporte des fautes. Merci d'avance.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

It's the story about a man who is called Samuel who overnight, one of its former conquests brings him a baby named Gloria that it claims to be his. And this young mother runs away in her country of origin England by leaving the baby in Samuel's arms.

Desperate Samuel tries to find her but to no avail. He meets at the airport a man who proposes him stuntman's role in its movie and having him none more solution he accepts.

And thus they are going to raise Gloria together.

Every day Gloria writes to her mother who abandoned him but she does not know him. Thus it's his father who answers him. Then one day her mother reappears in her life, by trying to make up for lost time but it's too late. Thus the mother of Gloria coffee tries to get back her by bringing in the justice. Then she decided to make tests DNA and discovers that Samuel is not finally the father of Gloria coffee. Thus she wants to take Gloria coffee to Samuel who raised him. But Laced coffee wishes to stay with his father Samuel because both are very in collusion. Unfortunately Gloria coffee was reached of a cancer since a few years and she lives her last moments at the end of the movie with those who she loves.




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bintou2002
bintou2002
Posté le 13 févr. 2018

It's the story about a man who is called Samuel, who overnight, one of its former conquests brings him a baby named Gloria that it claims to be his. And this young mother runs away in her country of origin England by leaving the baby in Samuel's arms.
Desperate Samuel tries to find her, but to no avail. He meets at the airport a man who proposes him a stuntman's role in its movie and having him none more solution he accepts.
And thus they are going to raise Gloria together.
Every day Gloria writes to her mother who abandoned him, but she does not know him. Thus, it's his father who answers him.

 

voila j’espère t'avoir aidez

Kim60
Kim60
Posté le 13 févr. 2018

Je ne vois pas de faute pour moi :)


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