Inventer une histoire policière (environ 20ligne) en anglais

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Inventer une histoire policière originale en utilisant correctement le prétérit simple et prétérit B+ing

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Brenda Craft had everything to be happy: she was beautiful, young, rich and to work trés indeed on the school. She had the best friend of the world, Jhon and the better two brilliant friend: Maya and Emily, and a coast of unlimited popularity. During January she recut anonymous threats which disturbed his tranquillity. Brenda escaped from few in a car accident: she was saved by Chuck, a mysterious boy who disappears before she was able to thank him. The next day when she had wanted to thank him, he had answered nothing and left without turning around. The rumour says that he would have killed his ex-girlfriend. Brenda was reported missing 3 days after. Brenda escaped from few in a car accident: she was saved by Chuck, a mysterious boy who disappears before she was able to thank him. The next day when she had wanted to thank him , he had answered nothing and left without turning around. The rumour says that he would have killed his ex-girlfriend. Brenda was reported missing 3 days aprés. Emily when to her voullait also to discover who had to kill her best friend, while she walked in the corridor of the lycé she heard Lindsey and Jhon quarrel.. She entered her room and found Brenda's personal diary which dated for one year, she found quite her quarrels, her courtship, her enjoyments and her punishments there, and full of photo of three girls or Brenda carried the necklace which had offered him Jhon and felt that the dormitory of three girls felt a smell of dried blood. The next day, Emily went to give the personal diary of Brenda to David. This last one studied him but found no indication. Jhon arrived and seemed to préocuper.
He asserted that the writing of warning letters seemed to him familiar. Emily also jetta a look and fetched a jacket in its room.Then she lives Maya tennant the necklace which Brenda carried all the time, and she understood. She rappellait of or vennait this writing, and the smell of the blood everything was clear has present. She pushed a crit, the enquéteur, Jhon and pupils arrived and Emily their explica that Maya was the culprit, then David found in the cupboard of Maya Brenda's body. Before going into the police car, addressing Emily and Jhon she taught them why she had killed him : " she had everything and I had nothing. I wanted to take revenge for his happiness which I was never able to have has cause of her. "