Paragraphe sur la mort de JFK

Publié le 31 mars 2010 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 2 avr. 2010 dans 13A
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Bonjour,je dois faire un paragraphe en Anglais sur mes hypothèses concernant la mort de Jfk.
J'ai fais le paragraphe suivant mais j'ai certainement dû faire beaucoup de fautes et il y'a certaines phrases que je n'arrive pas à traduire.(celles entre parenthèses)
Puvez-vous m'aider ?
Merci

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

The president John Federal Kennedy was assassinated in 22 November 1963 while visiting Dallas.This one was with his wife in the car at the Dealey Plaza and was greeting the crowd.
Three shots were shooting of a close house and a little after, the policeman, Jefferson Davis Tippit was assassinated by Lee Harvey Oswald.
It turned out what the rifle used to kill the president was the same what that used to kill the policeman.
Lee Harvey Oswald has certainly coupable in the murder of JFK but i think he has the only one.
Besides, three days later the death of JFK, Lee Harvey Oswald was assassinated by Jack Ruby.
This one was (en contact avec) “The organized crime” enemies of the etat, moreover he met the members of Chicago’s mafia.
I think, Jack Ruby( faisaient parti d’un complot avec Lee Harvey Oswald et que ce dernier fut tué pour ne pas dévoiler le nom de leurs commanditaires.)
I guess, it is probably organizations such as FBI, CIA, and Illuminati have organized this murder of JFK.



2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 31 mars 2010
Coucou, voici quelques suggestions de correction:

The president John Federal Kennedy was killed on the 22nd November 1963 while visiting Dallas.He was with his wife in the car at the Dealey Plaza and was greeting the crowd.
Three shots were shot of a close house and a little after, the policeman, Jefferson Davis Tippit was killed by Lee Harvey Oswald.
It turned out that the rifle used to kill the president was the same which was used to kill the policeman.
Lee Harvey Oswald is certainly responsible of the murder of JFK but i think he wasn't the only one.
Besides, three days after the death of JFK, Lee Harvey Oswald was killed by Jack Ruby.
This one was in contact with “The organized crime” enemies of the governement, moreover he met the members of Chicago’s mafia.
I think, Jack Ruby( was part of a plot organized with Lee Harvey Oswald whom was killed in order to stop him from revealing the name of their financier.)
I guess, it is probably organizations such as FBI, CIA, and Illuminati who have organized the murder of JFK.

Bonne chance
Anonyme
Posté le 1 avr. 2010
Voici quelques corrections dans le texte.Geronime doit être passé par un traducteur en ligne car le pauvre Kennedy est baptisé (une deuxième fois) Federal!!!!

President John Fitzgerald "Jack" Kennedy was assassinated on November 22, 1963 while visiting Dallas. He and his wife were greeting the crowd in the car while crossing Dealey Plaza.This was the moment when three shots were heard. Someone from a house close to the Plaza shot the president and gouvernor Connally. A little after, the policeman, Jefferson Davis Tippit was assassinated by Lee Harvey Oswald.
It turned out that the rifle used to kill the president was the same that the one used to kill the policeman.
Lee Harvey Oswaldwas certainly guilty of the murder of JFK but I think he was the only one.
Besides, three days after the death of JFK, Lee Harvey Oswald was assassinated by Jack Ruby.
This one was linked to “The organized crime” enemies of the state, moreover he met the members of Chicago’s mafia.
I think, Jack Ruby was part of the plot with Lee Harvey Oswald and he was killed in order to prevent him from revealing the name of the brains behind)
I guess, it was probably some organizations such as the FBI, the CIA, and the Illuminati which organized the murder of JFK.

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