rédaction de 150 mots

Publié le 15 mai 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 16 mai 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Je dois écrire une lettre de la part de Janet à ses parents, en 150 mots, qui vient de les quitter et qui leur raconte sa nouvelle vie.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Daddy, mummy,

I write you this letter to tell you how my life is now. After leaving you, I was affraid of being alone in this big city and i was wondering how my new life will be. On the contrary, many students of my school who saw that I was lost helped me and I didn't delay to integrate myself. I missed my former life but I like all the same this new life. My place isn't far of my school and the city's center so I have time to see my friends after school. I belong here now and I don't want to go.

I think about you very much.
Janet.



11 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
Dear mom and dad. Daddy (c'est quand on a 5 ans:-)

I am writting this letter to tell you how great my new life is now. After leaving you, I was afraid of being alone and on my won in this big city. I was wondering how my new life would be. But many students in my school knew I was alone and did everything to help me. So it did not take too long to adjust myself to this new life. Although I miss my past life and my friends, I like my new life too. My place is not too far away from my schoold and the center. Therefore, I have time to see my friends after school.
I belong here now and I don't want to leave.



Thinking about you

Love always

Yours Janet
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
pardon your janet
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
et pardon writing (il n y a qu'un t)
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
Dear mom and dad. Daddy (c'est quand on a 5 ans:-)

I am writing this letter to tell you how great my new life is now. After leaving you, I was afraid of being alone and on my own in this big city. I was wondering how my new life would be. But many students in my school knew I was alone and did everything to help me. So it did not take too long to adjust myself to this new life. Although I miss my past life and my friends, I like my new life too. My place is not too far away from my school and the center. Therefore, I have time to see my friends after school.
I belong here now and I don't want to leave.


Thinking about you

Love always

Your Janet

Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
Merci beaucoup !
Par contre je voudrai dire "vous devez etre surpris"
c'est should ?
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
You may be surprised to hear that I love my new life...
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
should c'est pour un conseil

You should not smoke it's bad for you!

Tu ne devrais pas fumer c'est mauvais pour toi !

Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
non c'est dans le sens "vous devez etre surpris de recevoir ma lettre"
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
you may be surprised to receive my letter.
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
Mais c'est un peu trop français à mon goût.

Moi je dirais You may be surprised to hear from me.
Anonyme
Posté le 15 mai 2011
Merci beaucoup !

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