Texte de présentation en anglais - URGENT!

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, 

pour les cours je dois rédiger un texte de présentation de ma vie en anglais dans le cadre d'un échange scolaire mais j'ai besoin d'une correction, serait-il possible de m'aider s'il vous plaît? Je dois l'envoyer à ma professeur ce soir.

Merci beaucoup.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Hello,

I'm Louise and I like reading, playing sport like boxing or swimming, playing

music and I love drawing so during my free time, I really draw a lot.

In the morning, I get up at 7 a.m and I'm going to school at 7.35 a.m with my

friends ( sometimes I am a little late ). I go to school walking so I arrive in class at 8

a.m. Usually, I'm studying until 12 a.m and either I go home to eat, or I eat at the

canteen. Around 1 p.m, I return in class until 5.30 p.m. I'm back my home to 6 p.m, I

take a few minutes to take my snack and I do my homework during one or two hours.

I do my homework in my bedroom, on my desk or my bed.

At school, I study ordinary subjects ( like french, mathematics, english or history)

and I study German, ancient Greek, economy and european english mathematics

class.

After school, I sometimes go to the conservatory for study music theory and

the recorder. When I can do sports, I go to boxing an swimming. Wednesday

afternoon, as I don';t have class, I go to the library, I see my friends or I stay at home

and I draw.

I live in a house with my parents and my brother and sisters, in a small

town in Normandy. The school is at 1.5 km from my house. Every member of my

family has their own bedroom and we have a guest room.

I've one brother, [ name ] he has [age ] and two sisters,[name],[age], and[name],

[age]. My parents are [name] and[name]. Their trades are ingenior and mathematics

teacher.

Since a few years, I travel with my family in several cities in Europe. So I

travel at London, Barcelona, Roma, Milano, Edinburgh, Brussels and soon, Budapest

and Krefeld ( in Germany, with my class). I know that my favourite travel was

Edinburgh, last years because there was snow everywhere and a magical atmosphere.

Usualy, our travels last between three days and a week. We are still travelling in

February because few people travel in February so we avoid the crowds and we can

get closer to the locals and it's really more interesting Now matter how long, I keep

an incredible memory of all my travels.

I love to eat and discover new dishes but there are food that I really don't like,

like spinach, cabbage, coconut and endives. I like animals, I have two cats, but I'm

afraid of snakes. I like to be traited with respect but I don't like to revolt so I don't say

anything when it happens to me but I get angry when people exaggerate.

To talk about my qualities and my faults, I tkink that I'm ambitious, open-

minded and creative but I'm disorderly and shy.

After my baccalauréat ( my final exam ), I would like to go « Gobelins »

school to do animation. I would like work in the Disney's studios for example.

I wish do make this exchange to meet new people, discover new cultures, make

new friends and to live new experience. I hope that this travel will make me more

mature and full of good memories. I think it's important to create new friendship with

young people around the world. I think this exchange can make me even more open-

minded and less shy.