Traduction de dialogue en anglais

Publié le 19 janv. 2010 il y a 14A par Anonyme - Fin › 21 janv. 2010 dans 14A
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Sujet du devoir

Je devais faire un dialogue en anglais sur la vente d'un téléphone pour enfant. Je l'ais fais en français mais maintenant je doit le traduire et je n'y arrive pas trop.

Pourriez vous m'aider pour la traduction ??

Merci d'avance.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Harry : Bonjour Mr. Smith, je suis le représentant d’i-kid. Comment vont les affaires ?

Smith : Ah bonjour, en ce moment les affaires ne sont pas très bonnes, notre chiffre d’affaire n’arrête pas de baisser et nos produit ne sont plus de taille face aux nouveau jouer arriver sur le marché de nos concurrents.

Harry : Je comprends mais j’ai une affaire à vous proposer qui vous fera remonter la pente. C’est une exclusivité que nous n’avons proposé à personne d’autre pour le moment. Nous avons conçu un téléphone portable pour les enfants qui est tactile et ressemble beaucoup à iPhone.

Smith : Le problème est que si il ressemble à l’iPhone, il y a un risque que les enfants ne l’adopte pas car ils souhaitent un téléphone coloré et amusant lors de l’utilisation.

Harry : Nous y avons pensé et c’est pour cela que nous avons fait une gamme possédant toute les couleurs de l’arc en ciel et de plus le téléphone s’appelle i-couleur.

Smith : Je suis conquis et je souhaite vendre ce portable mais j’espère qu’il me fera remonter la pente.

Harry : Oui ne vous en fait pas pour cela nous avons faits de nombreux teste de ce téléphone avec de nombreux enfants et ils été tous attirés par celui-ci.



11 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
Bonjour,

au lieu d'attendre la traduction de quelqu'un, pourrais tu donner la traduction que tu as faite, même incomplète et avec des fautes.
Comme ça, on reste dans l'esprit du site: aider, guider, expliquer, ne pas faire à la place.

Merci
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
Oui voila mon dialogue mais il y a trop de fautes.

Harry: Hello Mr. Smith, I am the representative of i-kid. How is the business?

Smith: Ah hello, in this moment the business is not very good, our sales turnover does not stop dropping and our product are not any more size vis-a-vis the new one playing to arrive on the market of our competitors.

Harry: I understand but I have a business to propose to you which will make you go up the slope. It is an exclusiveness which we proposed to nobody other for the moment. We designed a cellphone for the children which is tactile and resembles iPhone much.

Smith: The problem is that if it resembles the iPhone, there is a risk which the children does not adopt it because they wish a telephone coloured and amusing during the use.

Harry: We thought of it and therefore we made a range having all the colors of the arc in sky and moreover the telephone is called I-color.

Smith: I am conquered and I wish to sell this portable but I hope that it will make me go up the slope.

Harry: Yes does not make any you for that we made the many ones tests of this telephone with many children and they all attracted by this one.
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
oui essaie d'abord et on te corrigera si nécessaire, ça te servira bien plus de chercher les mots.
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
Oups désolé j'avais pas actualisé
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
Alors j'ai des fautes?
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
J'ai changé 2/3 trucs, dis moi ce que tu en penses, si tu ne comprends pas qqch,n'hésites pas!

Hello Mr. Smith, I am the representative of i-kid company. How is your business ?

Smith: Ah hello, at the moment, it's not very good. In fact, our turnover is sinking and our products are not enough attractiv ti fight against concurrence's toys on the new market.

Harry: I understand but I have a deal to purpose to you which will help you to refind success. It's an exclusivity and you are the first to discover it. We created a cell phone in order to attract childrens which is touch and look like so much with an Iphone. (look like = ressembler)

Smith: If the product is pratically a copie of the Iphone, there is a risk that childrens doesn't adopt it because they wish/research a funny and colored cell phone when they use it.

Harry: We thought about that point that's why we propose a huge range of colour, exactly all colour of a rainbow sky. Moreover the cell phone is called i-couleur.

Smith: I'm really interested by your product, I would like to sell it in order to increase our sales and our business.

Harry: Don't worry about it, we made a lot of tests with childrens and they have been automatically attract by this one.

Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
je me sert du texte corrigé par Simmagic pour l'améliorer encore.

Hello Mr. Smith, I am the representative of i-kid company. How is your business ?

Smith: Ah hello, at the moment, it's not very good. In fact, our turnover is sinking and our products are not enough attractive to fight against our concurrent's toys on the new market.

Harry: I understand but I have a deal to offer you which will help you to regain success. It's an exclusivity and you are the first to discover it. We created a cell phone in order to attract children which has a touch screen(un écran tactile) and look like an Iphone very much. (look like = ressembler)

Smith: If the product is almost a copy of the Iphone, there is a risk that children don't adopt it because they wish a funny and colored cell phone when they use it.

Harry: We thought about that point that's why we propose a huge range of colour, exactly all colour of a rainbow. Moreover the cell phone is called i-color.

Smith: I'm really interested in your product, I would like to sell it in order to increase our sales and our business.

Harry: Don't worry about it, we made a lot of tests with children and they all have been attracted by this one.


juste quelques corrections de vocabulaire.
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
Cenedra tu gères :)
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
Voila j'ai encore changé quelques trucs et enlevé des fautes (peu nombreuses quand même).

Hello Mister (Mr.) Smith, I am the representative of i-kid company. How's your business ?

Smith: Oh; Hello, at the moment, it's not very good. Our products selling are fall and our products are out than the new toys of our competitor.

Harry: I understand but I have a deal to purpose to you which will help you to refind success. It's an exclusivity and you are the first to discover it. We created a cell phone for childrens which is touch and look like so much an Iphone. (look like = ressembler)

Smith: If the product is pratically a copie of the Iphone, there is a risk that childrens doesn't adopt it because they wish/research a funny and colored cell phone when they use it.

Harry: We thought about that point that's why we propose a many and many colour, exactly all colour of the rainbow . Moreover the cell phone is called i-colour!!

Smith: I'm really interested by your product, I would like to sell it and hope It increase our sales and our business.

Harry: Don't worry about it, we made a lot of tests with childrens and they have been automatically attract by this one.
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
copy et pas copie.

Our sales products are fallen , je mettrai dancewithmee
Anonyme
Posté le 19 janv. 2010
juste quelques points pour que tu ne fasses pas de fautes dans ton devoir final:
-a purpose= un objectif (n'existe pas en verbe)
-a child (sing)=> children (plur) et non childrenS
-to refind n'existe pas, retrouver= to find again, to regain
- children don't (et pas doESn't, c'est un pluriel)

Dans cet état ça devrait mériter une bonne note!

Merci du compliment Simmagic :)

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