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I was on my way to go back home , it was a really hot night in new york, It was calm and their was a little wind
At approximatively , ten minutes of my house, I heard someone whispering louder and louder
Scared , I hurried to go back home I had the impression to be followed I returned and I saw a man dressed in suit, he was wearing glasses and he was strong
I was panicked and I ducked in a phone booth , I called the cops but that wasn’t enough because the man was armed I was afraid that he kills me then I called Henry Merrivale , a detective who I trusted
« Hello? I say worried »
«yes? Answered H.M in an effective voice and sur »
« I need your help I am frightened »
« How can I help you? Asked H.M »
« I’m being followed an armed man I am frightened I declared »
« all right calm down go in a public place I’m coming »
I am go to a restaurant waiting until he come
Relieved, I gave him an appointment where I fit in but the man had disappeared
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I was on my way to go back home , it was a really hot night in new york, It was calm and there was a little wind
At approximatively , ten minutes of my house, I heard someone whispering louder and louder
Scared , I hurried to go back home I had the impression to be followed I faced back and I saw a man dressed in suit, he was wearing glasses and he was strong
I was panicked and I ducked in a phone booth , I called the cops but that wasn’t enough because the man was armed I was afraid that he could kill me then I called Henry Merrivale , a detective whom I trusted
« Hello? I say worried »
«yes? Answered H.M in an effective voice and sur » ??? (tu veux dire quoi là ?)
« I need your help I am frightened »
« How can I help you? Asked H.M »
« I’m being followed by an armed man I am frightened I declared »
« all right calm down go in a public place I’m coming »
I went to a restaurant waiting until he came
Relieved, I gave him an appointment where I fit in but the man disappeared
I was on my way back home on a really hot (summer) night in New York. It was calm and their was a little wind.
I was ten minutes from my house, when I suddenly heard someone whispering louder and louder as I walked by.
Scared , I hurried on my way back home but I had the nagging impression of being followed. I turned around in time just to see a tall, strong man in suit and wearing glasses.
I panicked and ducked into a phone booth to call the cops but that wasn’t going to be enough because the man was armed I was afraid he was coming after me to kill me. I quickly decided to call Henry Merrivale, a detective that I grately trusted:
« Hello?, I begun, worried
- yes?, answered H.M in a sur and effective voice
- I need your help, I am frightened
- How can I help you?, asked H.M
- I’m being followed by an armed man it frightens me, I declared hysterically
- All right calm down go in a public place I’m coming »
He then told me that I was go to at a restaurant of his choosing, and wait until he came. I made sure that he would choose a place where I would fit in, and then hung up.
I then turned around to make sure it was safe to leave the booth, but the man had disappeard.
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I was on my way to go back home , it was a really hot night in new york, It was calm and there was a little bit of wind
At approximatively , ten minutes of my house, I heard someone whispering louder and louder
Scared , I hurried to go back home I had the impression to be followed I turned around and I saw a man dressed in suit, he was wearing glasses and he was strong
I was panicked and I ducked in a phone booth , I called the cops but that wasn’t enough because the man was armed I was afraid that he kills me then I called Henry Merrivale , a detective who I trusted
« Hello? I say worried »
«yes? Answered H.M in an effective voice and sur »
« I need your help I am frightened »
« How can I help you? Asked H.M »
« I’m being followed by an armed man ,I am frightened I declared »
« all right calm down go in a public place I’m coming »
I am going to a restaurant waiting until he comes
Relieved, I gave him an appointment where I fit in but the man had disappeared