Children exploited in the world

Sujet du devoir

There are 250children exploited in the world , it is totally inacceptable.
thoses harmful for their health physical and mental devellopement.
child labour occurs in the asia pasific region south africa.
the children work in agriculture, prostitution domestic labour , traficking , war and mining.
the children work because their families are poor.
today , the children not wark and go to school.
nowdays , the child labour is obsoltred in france.
There 19th century , the children hard work and dream to go to school.
thanks to abraham lincoln , today we don't work but not in certain country.
i'm so angry, i don't understang.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voilà mon discours , je n'arrive pas a le corrigé !
Si vous aver d'autre idée n'esitée pas !
Merci d'avannce !