correction exposé bill gates

Publié le 17 avr. 2017 il y a 6A par Anonyme - Fin › 20 avr. 2017 dans 6A
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Sujet du devoir

on doit faire un exposé sur Bill gates en anglais:

 

Fiche exposé anglais

 

Diapo 1:

Bill gates is an American business magnate, investor, author, and philanthropist but mostly the richest person in the world.

I. Personal life

 

1) Early life

His real name is William Henry "Bill" Gates III

Bill Gates was born in Seattle, Washington in USA on October 28, 1955.

He is the son of William H. Gates Sr and Mary Maxwell Gates

His father was a lawyer and his mother a teacher.

Gates has one older sister, Kristi (Kristianne), and one younger sister, Libby

 

 

 

 

2) His family

Gates married Melinda French in Hawaii on January 1, 1994

They have three children: Jennifer Katharine (born 1996), Rory John (born 1999), and Phoebe Adele (born 2002)

 

3) His home

 

Bill Gates lives in the Gates' home with his wife and three children in Medina near Seattle in the state of Washington.

His home in very modern because it have a swimming pool with an underwater music system

 

II. His school days and studies:

At 13, he enrolled in the Lakeside School, a private preparatory school who had a computer, Teletype Model 33.

He wrote his first computer program with a friend Paul Allen on Teletype Model 33 computer: an implementation of tic-tac-toe

Gates graduated from Lakeside School in 1973, and was a National Merit Scholar

He enrolled at Harvard College in the autumn of 1973

Gates dropped quickly his studies to focus exclusively to programming computers.

 

III. Microsoft

1)     Start of the business

When Bill Gates was at school, he was working with Paul Allen on a BASIC interpreter for the Altair 8800 the new microcomputer.

The company moved from Albuquerque to Bellevue, in Washington, the on January 1, 1979

2)        Windows

 

Microsoft Windows (or simply Windows) is a metafamily of graphical operating systems developed, marketed, and sold by Microsoft

 

Microsoft launched its first version of Microsoft Windows on November 20, 1985

 

3)        Microsoft Office

In 1990, Microsoft launched Microsoft Office.

Microsoft Office is an office suite of applications to work like Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft PowerPoint, and Microsoft Access …

4)                  Xbox

The Xbox is a home video game console developed by Microsoft . It was released on November 15, 2001, in North America, followed by Australia, Europe and Japan in 2002.

 

5)        Internet Explorer

Internet Explorer is a discontinued series of graphical web browsers developed by Microsoft , starting in 1995.

 

V. His wealth

In 1987, at the age of 31 years old, Bill Gates was a billionaire.

In 1995, Bill Gates became the richest person in the world.

Between 2009 and 2014, his wealth doubled from US$40 billion to more than US$82 billion.

In March 2017 his wealth was US$86.9 billion.

He will give 95% of his wealth for his foundation

 

IV. Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation

Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation is a charitable foundation founded by Bill and Melinda Gates.

It was launched in 2000 and is said to be the largest transparently operated private foundation in the world

The foundation is controlled by its three trustees: Bill Gates, Melinda Gates and Warren Buffett.

 

This foundation makes lot of action like Healthcare or Education in by using Donations and grants

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juliette.prost
juliette.prost
Posté le 17 avr. 2017

Bonjour,

j'ai remarqué que quelques fautes :

- après tous les nombres dans les dates, il faut écrire "th" à part pour "1" dans le petit 2 du grand 1 où il faut que tu écrives "st".

- dans le petit 3 du grand 1, mets plutôt "his" three children et c'est His home "is" et non, "in".

- dans le petit 1 du grand 3, c'est he "worked et non, he working.

-et dans le grand 5, c'est "of" the Word et non, on te world.

voila les erreurs que j'ai trouvées sinon je trouve ton texte très bien et intéressant.


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