Correction Grammaire texte Anglais

Publié le 23 avr. 2018 il y a 5A par Anonyme - Fin › 26 avr. 2018 dans 5A
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Sujet du devoir

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PS : Etude d'oeuvre C'est du POP ART AHAHA

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Analysis painting « Hopeless »

Identification


The title of the painting is « Hopeless »
Type of painting it’s an oil and acrylic paint on canvas
It was painted by Roy Lichtenstein in 1963
He was a Pop Artist
The size of this painting is 111,8 cm wide and 111,8 cms long
We can see this painting at the Kunstmuseum Basel of Art in Switzerland .


II. Analysis


The painting represents a young woman who is crying . According to the thought balloon above her head , we understand that she is desperate . We do not really know where she is , probably on her bed .

We don’t know where the scene takes place , the young woman may be in any place , but I guess she cries on her bed in her room .

I can’t know , the time , the weather or the season because the painting doesn’t gives us these information . The painting is centered on the young woman , we only perceive her tears that seem to fall in the sea and above her head dark colors including black and burgundy that are reminiscent of night , cold weather .

 

 

III. Description


The painting is divided into 3 different parts

In the foreground we can see a young woman with blue eyes and blonde hair who crying on her bed , but her tears form like a little sea beside her checks .

In the middle ground we can see the young woman’s face more precisely her right checks on which her tears flow .

There is no real background because behind the head of the young woma, we can’t perceive anything except the though balloon that leaves a despair message « That’s the way it should have begun ! But it’s hopeless » and which helps to better understand the painting .


III. Opinion

In this painting , I appreciate the fact that this looks like a comics with the though balloon , but the problem is that I didn’t have the context , that I wish I had . The real painting is made from dots , I like this technique that must complicated and meticulous for the artist . However , I do not really like the fact that this painting leaves a message of despair , the young woman represented looks very sad , I prefer when there is more joy .




1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 24 avr. 2018

bonjour :D  j'ai mis en gras ce qui me semblait ne pas aller et entre parenthèse une meileure formule, après c'est à toi de voir ;p J'ai trouvé que ton travail était très bien fait bravo!!

The title of the painting is « Hopeless »
Type of painting it’s an oil (the painting is an oil...) and acrylic paint on canvas
It was painted by Roy Lichtenstein in 1963
He was a Pop Artist
The size of this painting is 111,8 cm wide and 111,8 cms long
We can see this painting at the Kunstmuseum Basel of Art in Switzerland .


II. Analysis
The painting represents a young woman who is crying . According to the thought balloon above her head , we understand that she is desperate . We do not really know where she is , probably on her bed (enlève cette phrase parce que tu te répète juste après) .

We don’t know where the scene takes place , the young woman may be in any place , but I guess she cries on her bed in her room .

I can’t know , the time , the weather or the season because the painting doesn’t gives (sans s) us these information . The painting is centered on the young woman , we only perceive her tears that seem to fall in the sea and above her head dark colors including black and burgundy that are reminiscent of night , cold weather .

III. Description
The painting is divided into 3 different parts

In the foreground we can see a young woman with blue eyes and blonde hair who (is) crying on her bed , but her tears form like a little sea beside her checks (cheeks) .

In the middle ground we can see the young woman’s face more precisely her right checks (cheek) on which her tears flow .

There is no real background because behind the head of the young woma (the young woman's head), we can’t perceive anything except the though balloon that leaves a despair message « That’s the way it should have begun ! But it’s hopeless » and which helps to better understand the painting .


III. Opinion

In this painting , I appreciate the fact that this (it) looks like a comics (a comic book / a cartoon) with (because of) the though balloon , but the problem is that I didn’t have the context , that I wish I had . The real painting is made from dots , I like this technique that (which) must (be) complicated and meticulous for the artist . However , I do not really like the fact that this painting leaves a message of despair , the young woman represented ( the represented young woman) looks very sad , I prefer when there is more joy .

voilà bonne chance :D


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