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J'ai besoin qu'on me corrige sur mon devoir en Anglais, c'est en vérité un texte pour traiter un exposé en Anglais :
"Since 1880, industrial revolution date, the human beings' number in the Earth was 1 milliard before and is 7 milliards now. This demographic explosion has led the indutries' development, the agriculture development and the transports' development, which are of origin from big amounts' rejection of carbon dioxyde in the atmosphere."
"The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are greenhouse effect."
"At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have taken engagements to reduce their rejections of carbon dioxide and thus limit the Earth's average surface temperature."
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Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
J'ai souvent des problèmes de grammaires en ce qui concerne cette matière, l'Anglais, et j'aimerais vraiment m'améliorer.
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Since 1880, industrial revolution date, before, there was 1 milliard humans being on Earth,and now, is 7 milliards humans be on earth. This demographic explosion has led the indutries' development, of agriculture and the transports. It's the origin from big amounts' rejection of carbon dioxyde in the atmosphere because of the humanity modernization.
"The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are greenhouse effect."
"At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have sign engagements to reduce their rejections of carbon dioxide and thus limit the Earth's average surface temperature.
pas beaucoup de fautes c'est bien
"Since 1880, the date of the industrial revolution, the number of human beings on the Earth was 1 billion before and currently 7 billion. This population explosion has led to the development of industry, agricultural development and transport development, which originate from the release of carbon dioxide into large quantities into the atmosphere. "The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are in the greenhouse effect." "At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have made commitments to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and limit the average surface temperature of the Earth."
"Since 1880, the date of the industrial revolution, the number of human beings on the Earth was 1 billion before and currently 7 billion. This population explosion has led to the development of industry, agricultural development and transport development, which originate from the release of carbon dioxide into large quantities into the atmosphere.""The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are in the greenhouse effect.""At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have made commitments to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and limit the average surface temperature of the Earth."
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"Since 1880, the date of the industrial revolution, the number of human beings on the Earth was 1 billion before and currently 7 billion. This population explosion has led to the development of industry, agricultural development and transport development, which originate from the release of carbon dioxide into large quantities into the atmosphere."
"The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are in the greenhouse effect."
"At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have made commitments to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and limit the average surface temperature of the Earth."
J'espère avoir pu t'aider et regarde si j'ai pas fait des erreurs mais là ça me parait bon !
Bonne chance pour l'exposé ;)
Merci.
Mais quand tu parles d'erreurs, c'est-à-dire ?