Acceptez-vous de recevoir des notifications sur les meilleurs devoirs du site ?

Vous pouvez y mettre fin facilement à tout moment.
Non merci
Oui

Correction texte anglais

Publié le 21 avr. 2017 il y a 2 jours par Fefe1306 - Fin › 24 avr. 2017 dans dans 1 jour
1

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour,

 

J'ai besoin qu'on me corrige sur mon devoir en Anglais, c'est en vérité un texte pour traiter un exposé en Anglais :

 

"Since 1880, industrial revolution date, the human beings'  number in the Earth was 1 milliard before and is 7 milliards now. This demographic explosion has led the indutries' development, the agriculture development and the transports' development, which are of origin from big amounts' rejection of carbon dioxyde in the atmosphere."

"The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are greenhouse effect."

"At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have taken engagements to reduce their rejections of carbon dioxide and thus limit the Earth's average surface temperature."

 

Merci de votre aide !

 

 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

J'ai souvent des problèmes de grammaires en ce qui concerne cette matière, l'Anglais, et j'aimerais vraiment m'améliorer.




6 commentaires pour ce devoir


Il faut être inscrit pour accéder aux réponsesInscription gratuiteOUJ'ai déjà un compte
Nom d'utilisator
Nom d'utilisator
Posté le 21 avr. 2017

"Since 1880, the date of the industrial revolution, the number of human beings on the Earth was 1 billion before and currently 7 billion. This population explosion has led to the development of industry, agricultural development and transport development, which originate from the release of carbon dioxide into large quantities into the atmosphere."

"The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are in the greenhouse effect."

"At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have made commitments to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and limit the average surface temperature of the Earth."

J'espère avoir pu t'aider et regarde si j'ai pas fait des erreurs mais là ça me parait bon !

Bonne chance pour l'exposé ;)

 

 

Fefe1306
Fefe1306
Posté le 21 avr. 2017

Merci.

Mais quand tu parles d'erreurs, c'est-à-dire ?

Laura56mdrpronoscop
Laura56mdrpronoscop
Posté le 21 avr. 2017

Since 1880, industrial revolution date, before,  there was 1 milliard humans being on Earth,and now, is 7 milliards humans be on earth. This demographic explosion has led the indutries' development, of agriculture and the transports. It's the origin from big amounts' rejection of carbon dioxyde in the atmosphere because of the humanity modernization.

"The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are greenhouse effect."

"At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have sign engagements to reduce their rejections of carbon dioxide and thus limit the Earth's average surface temperature.

ATILA2-32002
ATILA2-32002
Posté le 21 avr. 2017

pas beaucoup de fautes c'est bien

L'ALGERIENDU39
L'ALGERIENDU39
Posté le 21 avr. 2017

"Since 1880, the date of the industrial revolution, the number of human beings on the Earth was 1 billion before and currently 7 billion. This population explosion has led to the development of industry, agricultural development and transport development, which originate from the release of carbon dioxide into large quantities into the atmosphere.        "The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are in the greenhouse effect."                 "At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have made commitments to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and limit the average surface temperature of the Earth."

nauemie
nauemie
Posté le 23 avr. 2017

"Since 1880, the date of the industrial revolution, the number of human beings on the Earth was 1 billion before and currently 7 billion. This population explosion has led to the development of industry, agricultural development and transport development, which originate from the release of carbon dioxide into large quantities into the atmosphere.""The carbon dioxide, but also methane and steam are in the greenhouse effect.""At the time of COP 21 in 2015 in Paris, 195 countries have made commitments to reduce carbon dioxide emissions and limit the average surface temperature of the Earth."

 


Ils ont besoin d'aide !

Il faut être inscrit pour aider

Crée un compte gratuit pour aider

Je m'inscrisOU

J'ai déjà un compte

Je me connecte