Lettre de motivation

Publié le 16 mai 2018 il y a 8 mois par simplement_mimi - Fin › 19 mai 2018 dans 7 mois
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Tuesday, May,15th
Stephen Cobor
Tribunal of London

Dear Sir, Subject: Application for the post of justice assistant
I am submitting this letter and enclosed resume in anticipation that you may have a vacancy within your tribunal.
Holder of a Master 1 in private law, obtained at the University of Grenoble, I continue my studies in Master 2 in private law. I would like to propose my candidacy for the duties of justice assistant.
I wish, indeed, to apprehend all the aspects of your profession of magistrate and to benefit from your experience in order to realize my professional project, that is to say to become magistrate.
I did several internships in law firms where I put my knowledge into practice, while learning to work quickly and efficiently. I have a taste for contact and responsibility; I have the spirit of synthesis and a good relationship. I want to benefit from my experience and my skills. I will carry out with rigour the tasks that you will entrust to me.
I would be delighted to meet you during an interview to better explain my motivations.
In the meantime, I beg you to believe, Mr Cobbor, my sincere best regards.


Myriam Liso


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Posté le 16 mai 2018

Ton texte est très bien. Tu n'as pas fais de fautes (d'après ce que j'ai lu). Juste un moment tu dis: "the aspects of your profession of magistrate and to benefit from your experience in order " mais je pense que c'est mieux de dire: [...] of the magistrate and to..." 

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