Lettre de motivation

Salut,

Je trouve que ton texte est bien formulé et compréhensible. C'est bien

Les mots que j'ai mis entre parenthèses ne sont pas faux mais ce n'est pas ce qu'un anglais dirait, il préférera toujours le terme anglo saxon plutôt que le terme latin, donc je te propose ce que spontanément j'aurai dit.

Dear Sir, Subject: Application for the post of justice assistant
I am submitting this letter and enclosed resume in anticipation that you may have a vacancy within your tribunal.
Holder of a Master 1 in private law, obtained at the University of Grenoble, I carry on (continue) my studies in Master 2 in private law. I would like to submit (propose) my candidacy for the duties of justice assistant.
I wish, indeed, to apprehend all the aspects of your profession of magistrate and to benefit from your experience in order to achieve (realize) my professional project, that is to say to become magistrate.
I did several internships in law firms where I put my knowledge into practice, while learning to work quickly and efficiently. I have a taste for contact and responsibility; I have a capacity for synthesis and  good relationships. I want to benefit from my experience and my skills. I will carry out with rigour the tasks that you will entrust me. 
I would be delighted to meet you during an interview to better explain my motivations.
In the meantime, I beg you to believe, Mr Cobbor, my sincere best regards.

Regards,

Myriam Liso