Petit dm pour un concert en anglais pour lundi 14.11.11

Publié le 13 nov. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 20 nov. 2011 dans 12A
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Sujet du devoir

Write in board of discussion about your last concert
a) Give precissions about the concer ( Who ? Where ? When ? Préterit ) .
b) Give you impressions about the concert Ex plain What you enjoyed the most . ( Je pense que c'est au préterit aussi )
c) Write 3 Questions you can ask bloggers .
d) Respect the internet code .

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voici mon travail :
Pseudo ; We found love 18
a ) I discovered Rihanna last month, the concert I saw was in California was great. I do not forget this concert.

b) ( J'AI FAIT DEUX TEXTES POURRIEZ VOUS ME DIRE QU'ELLE EST LE MIEUX MERCI ) 1 . My impressions of the concert Rihanna, are that it gave a great show: P, his voice was superb (Y). I do regret never having had, it was so magical! My camera was that photos of Rihanna. The worst is what is more beautiful in person than in pictures: O

2.My impressions on Rihanna; the day of the concert she(it) looked made a big Show. His voicewas magnificent, I do not regret having been, malgrés the price of the ticket there, it was so magic! That even my camera was filled, the worst it is what is even more beautiful in the truth. My music to prefer and " We Found Love "

c) The East for you the bloggers here is about questions on Rihanna to you to answer me
- Had already seen you Rihanna if yes Where ?
-For what what he one ever seen would like to see her to you? :P
- What is your music to prefer of Rihanna? :P

Voilà merci de me corriger . Bisous



4 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 13 nov. 2011
Bonjour,
Ce que j'ai changé est en MAJUSCULES.
I discovered Rihanna last month, in California. She gave an AWESOME show.In fact,her voice was MAGNIFICENT and she was very beautiful. WHAT IMPRESSIVE IT WAS! HOWEVER I regreted the bad quality of the pictures I took with my new camera which I received at Christmas day.
Bon ensuite tu peux raconter d'autres choses pour étayer un petit peu :) Dis par exemple avec tu es venue, ton voyage pour aller au concert, l'ambiance générale pendant le concert ...

c) Had YOU already seen Rihanna ?
Pour la 2e je vois pas ce que tu veux dire.
WHICH ( pour exprimer le choix ) song do you prefer ?
Anonyme
Posté le 13 nov. 2011


I went to a concert of Rihanna. It was the best show I had ever seen. Her voice was wonderful. I do not regret going to her concert even if the ticket price was pretty high.
My camera was full of her pictures. She is more beautiful in real than in pictures.

c) So let me ask you a few questions regarding Rihanna!
- Have you already seen Rihanna in concert if so Where ?
-Why did you go to her concert ? What were your impressions?
- What is your favourite song of Rihanna? :P
Anonyme
Posté le 13 nov. 2011
To go to the concert, I went with my cousin the trip to happen now. We will say can almost 9 hours, (N) The galley, at least the atmosphere of the concert was inexplicable! Most is that they had so many people that could not dance is probably the only flaw. I like it all together!
( Voila le truc en français Pour aller au concert , je suis partie avec ma cousine le voyage se passer en train . On va dire à peut près 9 heures , (N) La galère , en tous cas l'ambiance du concert était inexplicable ! Le plus c'est qu'ils y avaient téllement de mond qu'on ne pouvais pas dancer c'est sans doute le seul défaut . Mes c'est comme dans tous les concert !
Anonyme
Posté le 14 nov. 2011
I discovered Rihanna last month, in California.I came with my cousin and we took the train from .... to .... . The trip last around 9 hours. It was long but not boring because the seats were comfortable and I talked with my cousin because she's very talkative. When we arrived, I was so excited that I coudldn't keep still.
Rihanna gave an AWESOME show.In fact,her voice was MAGNIFICENT and she was very beautiful. WHAT IMPRESSIVE IT WAS! Everybody was screaming and I also know a girl who fainted ! HOWEVER I regreted the bad quality of the pictures I took with my new camera which I received at Christmas day. Moreover,there were so many people that we coudln't dance.
After all,I really enjoyed this concert and I'm still keen on Rihanna's songs
Que de progrès ! :)

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