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Publié le 16 mai 2017 il y a 6A par Anonyme - Fin › 19 mai 2017 dans 6A
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Bonjour,

J'ai effectué un texte en anglais dans lequel il faut exprimer des causes et des conséquences.

Pouvez-vous me corriger les fautes à ce devoir s'il vous plait ? 

Je vous remercie d'avance pour l'aide que vous pourriez m'apporter

 

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Immigration is the coming of people into a country in order to live and work there. The immigrants enters a country or region during a specified period

 

Reception and support activities for newcomers are crucial for obtaining results in the immigration sector. Indeed, immigration leads to citizenship, to cultural Diversity and diversity in the United States of America.

 

Widespread immigration leads to demographic change and, in most cases, increasing diversity. It's a very good thing for countries. Consequently, immigration policy issues must be dealt with horizontally, taking into account economic, cultural, health and other perspectives.

 

The Iran, Iraq, Libya, Somalia, Sudan, Syria, and Yemen. These are countries that have already been identified as presenting heightened concerns about terrorism and travel to the United States. The external dimension that causes immigration, and the cooperation mechanisms must therefore be strengthened more than they have been to date. This situation may result from immigration. This reasons trigger a wave of immigration

 

The impact of migration on the environment and the economic and social consequences of migration are good for many countries. The 2000 population census shown increased cultural heterogeneity in France society as a result of immigration. For many years Europe did not have to worry about the long-term consequences of immigration. The population increase was due to immigration. France has a long history of ethnic and cultural diversity due to immigration.

 

Government concerns over the level and consequences of immigration have greatly increased, especially in the developed world. Also, population distribution has consistently been the area of most concern to governments, especially in the developing countries. By 2025, the population of the EU is expected to grow slightly, due to immigration, but then to fall again.

 

The United States is one of a handful of advanced countries with a growing workforce, owing to its relative openness to immigration.

 

However, the number of persons in employment rose by 98000 over the same period owing to strong immigration.

 

Because of large-scale immigration to the United States in recent decades, many U.S. residents speak a language other than English at home and are not fluent in English.

 

Thanks to immigration, many communities holding non-traditional beliefs are now firmly established in the country.




6 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 17 mai 2017

C bien

Anonyme
Posté le 17 mai 2017

" this reasons trigger a wave ..." je penses qu'il y a une faute, si c'est au pluriel il faut écrire : these reasons et si c'est au singulier il faut écrire : this reason ;)

 

willffy
willffy
Posté le 17 mai 2017

Attends encore un peu, surtout que tu as posté ton devoir ailleurs .

willffy
willffy
Posté le 17 mai 2017

Tu as eu une réponse ailleurs de quelqu'un de compétent.

Anonyme
Posté le 17 mai 2017

Gamy ?

 

Anonyme
Posté le 18 mai 2017

 

Immigration is the coming of people into a country in order to live and work there. The immigrants enters a country or region during a specified period

Reception and support activities for newcomers are crucial for obtaining results in the immigration sector. Indeed, immigration leads to citizenship, to cultural Diversity and diversity in the United States of America.

 tu repete le meme mot

Widespread immigration leads to demographic changes and, in most cases, increases diversity. It's a very good thing for countries. Consequently, immigration policy issues must be dealt with horizontally, taking into account economic, cultural, health and other perspectives.

 

The Iran, Iraq, Libya, Somalia, Sudan, Syria, and Yemen. These are countries that have already been identified with heightened concerns about terrorism and travel to the United States. The external dimension that causes immigration, and the cooperation mechanisms must therefore be strengthened more than they have been to date. This situation may result from immigration and it can also trigger a wave of the former.

 

The impact of migration on the environment, the economic and social consequences of migration are good for several country. The 2000 population census shown increased cultural heterogeneity in France society as a result of immigration. For many years Europe did not have to worry about the long-term consequences of immigration. The population increase was due to immigration. France has a long history of ethnic and cultural diversity due to immigration.

 

Government concerns over the level and consequences of immigration have greatly intensified, especially in the developed world. Also, population distribution has consistently been the area of most concern to governments, especially in the developing countries. By 2025, the population of the EU is expected to grow slightly, due to immigration, but then to fall again.

 

The United States is one of a handful of advanced countries with a growing workforce, owing to its relative openness to immigration.

 

However, the number of employees in the employment section rose by 98000 over the same period owing to strong immigration.

 

Because of large-scale immigration to the United States in recent decades, many U.S. residents speak a language other than their first language which is English at home therefore they are not fluent in English.

 

Thanks to immigration, many communities used to holding non-traditional beliefs are now firmly established in the country.


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