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Publié le 28 avr. 2011 il y a 12A par Anonyme - Fin › 5 mai 2011 dans 12A
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Je doit traduire ceci, mais je ne sui pas sur de ma traduction.

Lorsque les enfants sont petits ils obéissent à la volonté de leur parents mais au fur et à mesure qu’ils grandissent et deviennent des adolescents ils cherchent à gagner l’indépendance de leurs parents. Afin de devenir indépendant, ils cherchent à prouver à leur parents qu’ils peuvent se débrouillés seul, sans l’aide de quelqu’un, par exemple en gardant leur petit frère ou en cherchant un travail d’été pour gagner de l’argent par soi-même. En faisant cela l’adolescent montre à ses parents qu’il sait prendre ses responsabilités.
Mais cela ne suffit pas à gagner complètement l’indépendance de ses parents. Lorsque l’adolescent devient majeur donc un jeune adulte, il cherche à discuter avec ses parents pour les convaincre de le laisser se débrouiller seul, par ses propres moyens. Les gens deviennent vraiment indépendant seulement lorsqu’ils quittent leurs parents pour mener leur propre vie, c’est donc lorsqu’ils trouvent un travail, un logement, et fonde une famille qu’ils le deviennent. Puis plus tard quand ils auront un enfant, ils voudront que leur enfant leur prouve qu’il peut être indépendant.
Moi, j’ai presque gagné l’indépendance de mes parents car je leur prouve quotidiennement que je sais me débrouiller seul par exemple en me débrouillant seul pour aller quelque part ou encore en travaillant pendant les vacances pour gagner un peu d’argent, mais aussi en sachant économiser mon argent au lieu d’acheter des choses inutiles. En leur montrant que je suis responsable ils me laissent un peu plus de liberté. Donc je pense que pour gagner l’indépendance de ses parents il faut au quotidien montrer que l’on peut se débrouiller seul, que l’on est responsable et que l’on fait les bons choix.
Mais je pense que l’on n’est jamais totalement indépendant, on dépend souvent de quelqu’un ou de quelque chose.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Voici ma traduction, j'avoue que je me suis aider un peu d'un traducteur.

When the children are small they obey the will of their parents but as they grow and become teenagers they try to gain the independence of their parents. To become independent, they try to prove to their parents that they can manage only, without the help assistant of somebody, for example by keeping guarding their small brother or by looking for a summer work to gain some money by itself. By making it the teenager shows to his parents that he knows how to take his responsibilities. But it is not enough to gain completely the independence of his parents. When the teenager becomes major thus a young adult, he tries to discuss with his parents to convince them to let him manage only, all on one's own. People become really independent only when they leave their parents to live their own life, it is thus when they find a work, an housing, and starts a family that they become him. Then later when they will have a child, they will want that their child proves them that he can be independent. I almost gained the independence of my parents because I prove them daily that I know how to manage only for example by untangling me only to go somewhere or still by working during the holidays to gain a little money, but also by knowing how to save my money instead of buying useless things. By showing them that I am responsible they leave me a little more freedom. Thus I think that to gain the independence of his parents it is necessary for the everyday life to show that we can manage only, that we are responsible and that we make the good choices. But I think that we are never totally independent, we often depend on somebody or on something.

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3 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 29 avr. 2011
When children et pas " the children " je pense . Sinon c'est très bien.
Anonyme
Posté le 29 avr. 2011
When children are small they have to obey their parents but as they grow and become teenagers they try to gain more independence from their parents. To become independent, they try to prove to their parents that they can manage only, without the help or assistance of somebody, for example by looking after their younger brother or by looking for a summer work to gain some money on their own.. By doing so, the teenager shows to his parents that he knows how to take his responsibilities. But it is not enough to gain completely the independence fom his parents. When the teenager becomes major therefore a young adult, he tries to discuss this with his parents to convince them to give him more independance. People become really independent only when they leave their parents to live their own life. This is when they find a work, a housing, and starts a family that they become independent. Then later when they have a child, they will want that their child to prove them that he or she can be independent. I have almost gained the independence from my parents because I prove them daily that I know how to manage myself nly for example by untangling ? (que veux-tu dire) me only to go somewhere or still by working during my vacation to earn some money, but also by knowing how to save my money instead of buying useless things. By showing them that I am responsible they give me more freedom. Thus I think that to gain the independence from his parents it is necessary for everyday's life to show that we can manage , that we are responsible and that we make the good choices. But I think that we are never totally independent, we often depend on somebody or on something.

Anonyme
Posté le 29 avr. 2011
When children are little, they obey to their parents but as soon as they grow up and become teenagers, they look for independence from their parents. In order to be independent, they try to prove their parents that they are to manage alone, without the help of anybody, for example like taking care of a younger brother or by looking for a summer job to make some money on their own. To do so, the teenager shows to his or her parents that he can take responsibilities. But this is not enough to be fully independent from one's parents, he tries to talk with his or her parents to convince them to let him or her to manage himself or herself with his or her own means.

I have nearly got independence from my parents because I daily show them that I can manage by myself like for instance going somewhere or working during vacation to earn some money and also by saving money and not buyiing useless things. By showing to my parents that I am responsible, they give me more freedom. So I think that in order to get independence from one's parents, one has to show that one can manage alone, and one is responsible and can make the right choice.

But I think that we are never fully independent. We often rely on somebody or on something.

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