- Partage ce devoir avec tes amis !
Sujet du devoir
Avec l'image ecrivez un email pour etre choisi comme colocataire.
Sujet :
Vous voulez etre choisi comme colocataire. Vous écrivez un e-mail à Gemma. Précisez pourquoi vous lui écrivez, qui vous etes, quelle est votre personnalité, quelles sont vos habitudes de vie et pourquoi l'appartement vous convient. N'oubliez pas de poser des questions pour avoir plus de détails sur l'appartement et les colocataires.
Image concernant mon devoir de Arabe
Où j'en suis dans mon devoir
Voici ce que j'ai fait :
From : francois.gerard@gmail.fr
Date : Friday, 26th September 2014
Object : RE / Flatmate Wanted
Hi Gemma,
My name is François GERARD, and I'm looking for a room to rent in Liverpool. I am 14 years old and I live in Verdun in France. I am tidy, reliable, clean and polite. I don't like play a instrument. I like very much helping people because i am helpful. I don't often invite guests and i never give parties because i get up at 6 am Every day. I am very good at cooking. I practise sport. I am don't noisy but quiet. You ad interested me because i will study in Liverpool. How many flatmate do you take ? How many rooms are there ? What is the surface area of the flat? How is the living room ? It is sunny ? How much is the rent ? What is the neighborhood like ? It is noisy or quiet flat ?
Please Contact me Gemma. Good By.
3 commentaires pour ce devoir
-i am not noisy but quiet
- tu n'es pas obligé de marquer "reliable"
-Your announcement interest me because this year I study in Liverpool.
I don't like playing an instrument ou bien I don't play any instrument
I am not noisy but quiet. On peut mettre plutôt I am a quiet person
Is it a noisy or quiet flat ? (quand tu poses une question tu inverses sujet + verbe)
I have been interested by your advertisement because I'm looking for a flat in Liverpool where I will begin my studies.
Ils ont besoin d'aide !
- Aucun devoir trouvé, poste ton devoir maintenant.
Hi Gemma,
My name is François GERARD, and I'm looking for a room to rent in Liverpool. I am 14 years old and I live in Verdun in France. I am tidy, reliable, clean and polite. I don't like playing instruments. I like very much helping people because I am helpful. I don't often invite guests and I never give parties because I get up at 6 am every day. I am very good at cooking. I practise sports. I am not noisy but quiet. You interest me because I will study in Liverpool. How many flatmate do you take ? How many rooms are there ? What is the surface area of the flat ? How is the living room ? Is it sunny ? How much is the rent ? What is the neighborhood like ? Is it a noisy or quiet flat ?
Please contact me Gemma. Goodbye.
Attention, il y a toujours une majuscule à "I", même en milieu de phrase. Ensuite, lorsque tu dis "I don't like playing instruments" (Je n'aime pas jouer à des instruments), tu ne veux pas plutôt dire "Je ne joue pas d'instrument" (I don't play any instrument) ?
Sinon c'est pas mal du tout ! :)