Raconter sa vie au futur (inventer)

Publié le 10 févr. 2010 il y a 9A par Nanouu-79251 - Fin › 22 févr. 2010 dans 9A
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Sujet du devoir

Raconter et inventée une vie au futur.
Je passe à l'oral pendant 1mn.
Merci de bien vouloir mais éventuelles éreurs.
:).

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Français:
-Quand j'aurai fini mes études.
-Je partirai étudier à Bristol et je deviendrai actrice de cinéma.
-Ensuite j'habiterai à New York et j'achéterai une maison pour les vacances à Miami , je travaillerai avec les plus célébres acteurs comme Jhonny Deep ou encore George Cloney.
-J'épouserai le futur président des Etats-Unis et nous aurons trois enfants.
-Je serai propriétaire du plus grand parc d'atraction du monde et je gagnerai de l'argent qui sera reverssai aux pays victimes de catastrophe naturelles.
-Mon mari et moi fêterons notre dixiéme anniverssaire de mariage à Hong Kong en compagnie de notre familles et de nos amis ainsi que les plus grands artistes de la musique.
-Ensuite je prendrai ma retraite et viverai heureuse en compagnie de mes proches.

Anglais:
-When I finish school, I will to go in Bristol and I will become actor to the cinema.
-The I will live to New York and I may buy holiday house in Miami.I will work with the most famous actors like Jhonny Deep either George Cloney.
-I might marry with the USA Président and we may have got three child.
- I will be owner of the big most atraction park of the world and I will win money for the country victim of disaster natural.
-My husband and me celebrate our thenth birthday of married in Hong Kong accompany ours familly, firend and the big most artists of the music.
-Then I will have got my retired and live happy with my near.



14 commentaires pour ce devoir


Rose75
Rose75
Posté le 10 févr. 2010
CouCou!!

-When I will finish my studies, I will to go in Bristol and I will become actress.
-Then, I will live in New York and I may to buy house for holidays in Miami.I will work with the famous actors like Jhonny Deep or George Cloney.
-I will marry with the American Président and we will have got three child.
- I will be owner of the biggest atraction park of the world and I will have a lot of money for the countries wich are victim of disaster natural.
-My husband and me will celebrate our thenth birthday of marriage in Hong Kong with our familly and the famous artists of the musictoo.
-Finally, I will have got my retired and I will live happy with my family.

Et bien, tu en as des rêves!! lol! ;-D



starsandstripes85
starsandstripes85
Posté le 10 févr. 2010
Bonsoir,

Voilà ma correction (en gras, mais pas tout):

When I finish school, I will go TO Bristol and become an actress.
I will live IN New York and I might buy a house for the holidays in Miami. I will work with the most famous actors SUCH AS Johnny Depp and George Clooney. I might MARRY the President of the United States and we MAY have three CHILDREN.(le pluriel de child est "children")
I will be THE owner of the BIGGEST attraction park of the world and will RAISE money for the countries which are victims of natural disasters.
My husband and I (sujet, donc on n'utilise pas "me") will celebrate our 10th WEDDING ANNIVERSARY in Hong Kong surrounded by our families, friends and the best music artists.
Finally I will retire and live happily with the people I appreciate.

J'espère que cela t'aidera :-)
Nanouu-79251
Nanouu-79251
Posté le 12 févr. 2010
Merci :)
Il fallait inventé ;)
Nanouu-79251
Nanouu-79251
Posté le 12 févr. 2010
Merci :).
abdel75
abdel75
Posté le 15 févr. 2010
Slt
je t'ai cORRIger les erreurs
Voila :
-When I will finish my studies, I will to go in Bristol and I will become actress.
-Then, I will live in New York and I may to buy house for holidays in Miami.I will work with the famous actors like Jhonny Deep or George Cloney.
-I will marry with the American Président and we will have got three child.
- I will be owner of the biggest atraction park of the world and I will have a lot of money for the countries wich are victim of disaster natural.
-My husband and me will celebrate our thenth birthday of marriage in Hong Kong with our familly and the famous artists of the musictoo.
-Finally, I will have got my retired and I will live happy with my family.

Demande moi si tu comprend pas certains mot Voila A+
starsandstripes85
starsandstripes85
Posté le 17 févr. 2010
Abdel75 a voulu t'aider, MAIS son texte comporte plus de fautes que le tien (des erreurs dans chaque phrase....prudence donc)

Eva1888
Eva1888
Posté le 17 févr. 2010
-I will live in NYC and i will buy a vacation house in Miami, i'll work with celebrities like Jhonny Depp and George Clooney.
-I will be married with the future president of the United States and we will have 3 children.
-I will be the proprietary of the biggest attraction park in the world...
-My husband and I will celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary in Hong Kong with our family, friends and the biggest music artists.
-Then I will be retired i will live happy with my family.
pamote
pamote
Posté le 20 févr. 2010
moi je trouve sa super bien le truk c si tu met WIIL c bon parce que c'st la marque du futur mais franchemant c bien continu comme sa !!
Nanouu-79251
Nanouu-79251
Posté le 20 févr. 2010
Merci :)
Nanouu-79251
Nanouu-79251
Posté le 20 févr. 2010
D'accord merci beaucoup :)
Nanouu-79251
Nanouu-79251
Posté le 20 févr. 2010
Merci :).
Nanouu-79251
Nanouu-79251
Posté le 20 févr. 2010
Oui merci :)
C'est obligé de mettre la marque du futur d'après le prof.
Mathy
Mathy
Posté le 20 févr. 2010
Coucou Nanou !

Voici ma traduction :

- when I shall have finished my studies.
- I shall leave studying in Bristol and I shall become a movie actress.
- then I shall live in New York and I achéterai a house for the holidays in Miami, I shall work with most célébres actors as Jhonny Deep or still George Cloney.
- I shall marry the future president of the United States and we shall have three children.
- I shall be an owner of the biggest park of atraction of the world and I shall gain(win) some money(silver) which will be reverssai in countries victims of natural disasters.
- my husband and I shall celebrate our dixiéme anniverssaire of marriage in Hong-Kong together with our families and of our friends as well as the biggest artists of the music.
- then I shall retire and viverai happy together with my close relations.

En espérant t'avoir aidée,
Mathy :)

XvIcToRiA
XvIcToRiA
Posté le 21 févr. 2010
may have gor three children vu que tu auras plusieur enfants avec le futur presidents des usa
yours family pas ours family

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