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Why do you have to go see the movie Romeo and Juliet ? 

This classic Shakespeare is timeless over time. Baz Luhrmann has transposed this ancient work to our time, we move from Verona, Italy to Verona, California, USA in the 16C. at 20C while keeping the original text. This gives a mix between the modern and the old very original and surprising. Luhrmann dared to make a controversial adaptation, it was a little: "it's gone or it breaks". What I say "passes" very well, keeping the original replicas of the film and mixing it in the very modern, extravagant, unusual and comic of this film, makes it more prodigious and is very close to the fascinating Shakespeare play. However, the major asset of this film for many audiences is still the actor who embodies Romeo: Leonardo di Caprio. "Oh Romeo, Romeo, why are you Romeo, Rennie your father and abdicate your name, Orif, you do not want it, swear to love me, and I will not be a Capulette anymore.

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Why do you have to go see the Romeo and Juliet movie?
This classic Shakespeare is timeless over time. Baz Luhrmann has transposed this ancient work to our time, we move from Verona, Italies to Verona, California, USA, the 16C. in the 20C, while keeping the original text.
This gives a mix between the modern and the old, very original and surprising.
Luhrmann was daring to make a controversial adaptation, it was a little: "it went or it breaks".
What I say "passed" very well, keeping the original replicas of the film and the mixed in the very modern, extravagant, unusual and comic of this film,

Ils ont tous les deux raison

non mi je trouve que c'est pas trop mal