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Dear Mr Sehwag,

I am writing to apply for the position of manager logistic advertised on the website, I enclose my CV for your records and would be grateful if you would consider my application should a suitable post arise.

I have recently awarded a diploma of Technological University in the department logistic and transport from Mulhouse and hope to put this to use in the field of logistic and transport.

The course covered many topics, and I was particularly drawn to studied are «management of planning of the wage earners, management of parcels litigations and management of supply and accounting».I am looking to develop specialist skills in this area and build a successful career.

My academic credentials coupled with my previous experience as a operation manager Assistant within a prestigious company SUEZ make me think that I have both the skills and the background you are looking for.

Having extensively researched your company’s values and products, I was especially interested in [INSERT COMPANY ASPECT THAT ATTRACTED YOU].I feel it would be the ideal place for me to begin my career and I believe I can be an excellent addition to your team.

Holder of a driving license I am mobile. Enclosed is a copy of my resume which provides further details about my studies and qualifications. I am available for interview at any time and would be able to start work within a month of handing in my notice. Please do not hesitate to contact me above address if you require any further information.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully,

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Dear Mr Sehwag,

I am writing to apply for the position of manager logistic advertised on the website, I enclose my CV for your records and would be grateful if you would consider my application should a suitable post arise.

I have recently awarded a diploma of Technological University in the department logistic and transport from Mulhouse and hope to put this to use in the field of logistic and transport.

The course covered many topics, and I was particularly drawn to studied are «management of planning of the wage earners, management of parcels litigations and management of supply and accounting».I am looking to develop specialist skills in this area and build a successful career.

My academic credentials coupled with my previous experience as a operation manager Assistant within a prestigious company SUEZ make me think that I have both the skills and the background you are looking for.

Having extensively researched your company’s values and products, I was especially interested in [INSERT COMPANY ASPECT THAT ATTRACTED YOU].I feel it would be the ideal place for me to begin my career and I believe I can be an excellent addition to your team.

Holder of a driving license I am mobile. Enclosed is a copy of my resume which provides further details about my studies and qualifications. I am available for interview at any time and would be able to start work within a month of handing in my notice. Please do not hesitate to contact me above address if you require any further information.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours faithfully,