Profil en anglais

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour à tous,


Dans le cadre d'un exercice, je dois rédiger une lettre de recommandation en anglais, brossant en quelques sortes le portrait de l'étudiant idéal. J'ai déjà rédigé entièrement le corps de ma lettre, cependant j'aimerais que vous y jettiez un oeil, histoire de corriger mes éventuelles fautes de langue ou tournures maladroites!


En vous remerciant d'avance,
Phyllis.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

XXX XXX's final year in High School was overall impressive, he distanced himself from the rest of the class with his excellent english level. He participated a lot during the lectures, demonstrating a vast knowledge and some essential analytical skills. As a proof of his autonomy and his maturity, his personnal work really impressed me.

As he has been developing his project of stuying international law for years, he has been many times to english-speaking countries such as Australia and he is now willing to discover England : adapting to a different country will definitely not be a problem for him.

As a conclusion, this student seems to have the level, the experience and the motivation to success in this course.