Anglais petite rédaction

Publié le 10 févr. 2017 il y a 7A par Anonyme - Fin › 13 févr. 2017 dans 7A
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Sujet du devoir

Bonjour, alors voilà, j'ai un petit podcast d'1 minute à rédiger, et pour cela, je dois répondre à la question suivante : "What is it like to be a student?". Je voulais donc savoir si quelqu'un pouvais me corriger ce que j'ai fait. Je ne suis pas très douée, mais j'ai fais de mon mieux. Je vous remercie d'avance et vous souhaite une très bonne soirée. Voici le texte:

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Firstly, I think my course in UPMC is a good example to illustrate my impressions. Indeed, I think that UPMC offers many different courses, such as BGC, PICI ... they help to specialized us and in this way, they help to make this job easier. My student’s life is very interesting because I’m very free, contrary to high school. I think we are more independent and it’s more important for me because I can me organized and use my own working methodology. But there are different negatives aspects. For example, the university is very large but, the first day, I was lost. Moreover, it’s very away for some people. For example, I have about 1h15 of transport for the outward and the return. So, I have approximately 2h30 per day.




2 commentaires pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 10 févr. 2017

Indeed, I think UPMC offers many different courses, such as BGC, PICI ... they (qui est they ?) help us to specialize and in this way they help to make this work easier. My student life is very interesting because I am very free, contrary to what I experienced in high school. I think we are more independent and that is important to me because I can organize and use my own working methodology. But there are some negative aspects too. For example, the university is very large. The first day, I got lost. In addition, it is very far for some people. For example, I have about 1h15 of transport for the go and return. So I have about two and a half hours a day of travel time.

Anonyme
Posté le 10 févr. 2017

Dans un premier temps je te remercie de m'avoir corrigé. Pour ce qui est de "they", il qualifie les différents parcours. Encore un grand merci.

 


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