Correction de ma lettre de motivation pour un stage en anglais

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Bonjour à tous,

Je suis nouvelle sur le forum donc désolée si je ne suis pas exactement dans les clous, je découvre...
Je poste ce message car j'ai réalisé une lettre d motivation pour trouver un stage à l'étranger pour mon DUT et j'aimerai qu'on me donne des conseils à ce sujet et qu'on me corrige les quelques fautes qui doivent se balader....

Merci d'avance !

Voici le contenu de ma lettre :

Dear Sir or Madam,

 
I am writing to enquire about the possibility of joining your orphanage on student placement for two months during the summer 2017.

I am currently studying Social Careers at Périgueux Institute of Technology which is a campus of Bordeaux University.

My main objective is to develop my English skills in social relations and local development in your country. Within my program, I study sociology, anthropology, psychology and I have to do a two-month placement to put these subjects into practice abroad.

As you will see from my résumé enclosed, I have some experience in the world of work so I am mature and hard-working, consciencious. I love children and I want to help people whenever I can. My professional objective is to become a teacher or to work in a charity.

As you can see, I am really motivated and ready to work with you and discover your culture.

I believe this experience should be of mutual interest to you and me as a trainee that is why I would be grateful if you could offer me food and accommodation in exchange for my unpaid help to you for eight or nine weeks next summer. I am available early June to the end of August. So feel free to choose the period that best suits your needs and I will adapt according.

You will find further details of my career in the attached CV. Thank you in advance for your interest in my application. Please contact me for further information. I am available for a phone or Skype interview at your convenience. Please be aware that the time difference with France.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Léna ****