Anglais petite rédaction

Sujet du devoir

Bonjour à tous ! ;) J'aurais besoins d'aide afin de me corriger un exposé en anglais. Elle est terminée, mais j'aimerais avoir votre avis et qu'on me corrige les fautes de langue. L'objectif était de décrire une université dans le monde. Pour cela, j'ai choisi d'étudier l'université de Melbourne, en Australie. Ce n'est pas très long, j'espère juste ne pas avoir fait trop de fautes de langues, et que je ne me sois pas trompé dans les différentes informations, illustrée par des flèches. Je vous remercie d'avance.

Camlou :)

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

Exposé anglais

The university of Melbourne, Australia:

-->What is Melbourne university?

The university of Melbourne is an Australian university. It is situated in the south of Australia, precisely the south-east. It is a public-spirited institution that makes distinctive contributions to society in research, learning and teaching and engagement.

--> Universities classment?

In the international rankings of world universities placing Melbourne university it as the number 1 in Australia and number 33 in the world

--> Into about the degrees?

There exist differents types of diplomas like undergraduate study (design, music, sciences…), but also pathway options, concurrent diploma and majors (to focus your undergraduate degree). But there are different courses type: research higher degrees, masters and doctors by coursework and diplomas or certificates like faculty of veterinary and agricultural sciences or graduate schools of humanities and social sciences.

-->Tuition fees?

The tuition fees are subject-based fees, which means you'll pay per the subjects you are studying, not your course. In fact, the tuitions fees depend about the courses of students. For example, humanities, behavioural science, social studies, education… $6,256 per standard year, $782 per standard subject. It’s the student contribution.

--> Expenditures?

But there are not just the tuition fees. Students must live in good conditions and they must pay weekly cost, other than rent, like phone ($15-$20), food and grocery ($80-$150), public transport ($40) … So, we can say that it’s very expensive for all students because they pay different items and tuition fees to study. The accumulation of different items is very expensive for all students.

--> Housing/accommodation

Rental property prices vary from suburb to suburb. There exists different type of accommodation like student apartment, hostel, residential colleges (near or on campus), homestay… I take the example of Student Accommodation Melbourne on “student.com” and the price varies between $200 and $400 per week.

--> Entertainment?

During their free time the students can leave to discover the city, there are always bars, restaurants, cafes, gardens to discover. They can also make markets, follow events, festivals and go to concerts. But many students work during their spare time.