Correction des fautes SVP

Publié le 7 nov. 2010 il y a 13A par Anonyme - Fin › 9 nov. 2010 dans 13A
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Sujet du devoir

Je dois imaginer la conversation des parents de Adam après qu'ils ont vu le message " Just stay quiet and all safe " et qu'ils ont remarqué qu'Adam avait disparu.

Où j'en suis dans mon devoir

After reading the message " Just stay quiet and all safe" ...
" What is this ... this this message Mike ?
Leave me reflect please Tia, it's so strange !
I know Mike but ...
BUT WHAT ?
Must to act, ME TOO I KNOW CRY MIKE ! QUESTION OF MY SON ! MY SON, my baby, my life ...
He is also my son, you know that ?
I'm sorry, I'm so worried ! What is the meaning of the message in your opinion ? Why Adam is absent ? Where is he ?
I don't know ! In this picture, it happens that is Adam, look !
T think Adam is implies in the suicide of his classmate ! That time, it's was really strange.
I also think is implies in this story but i don't believe he did anything wrong !
You think he saw his friend to commit suicide ?
I don't think it was a suicide ! I think he saw maybe what's happened.
It's possible but what's to be done ? I want to find my son.



1 commentaire pour ce devoir


Anonyme
Posté le 8 nov. 2010
Bonjour Ilyana7,

Voici ton text corrigé:

"After reading the message:
"Just stay quiet and you'll be safe"...
"What is this... this, this message Mike?
Let me read please Tia, it's so strange!
I know Mike but...
BUT WHAT?
Should we do somthing? ME TOO I KNOW CRY MIKE! QUESTION OF MY SON! MY SON, my baby, my life...(je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire par là)
He is also my son, you know that?
I'm sorry, I'm so worried! What is the meaning of the message in your opinion? Why isn't Adam here? Where is he?
I don't know! In this picture, it happens to be Adam, look!
I think Adam is implied in the suicide of his classmate! That time, it's was really strange.
I also think it implies in this story but I don't believe he did anything wrong!
You think he saw his friend commit suicide?
I don't think it was a suicide! I think he saw maybe what happened.
It's possible, but what got done? I want to find my son!"

Cordialement,

Benjamin CNED 3ème

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